Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
In the century of the cosmic development of society, it is hard to say that our nowadays determinations base on our glorious past. However, as it was said by classics: “ It is impossibale to make heroic future without historical past”.
Hence to this phrase, we can dare to say that knowing about the past give to person huge opportunities to do significant decisions in his or hers life.
To counterbalance to the statement, it would be said that our past experience could protect us to make unforgivable mistakes. For instance, knowing about the sorrowful results of the Civil War humanity try to evade from such kind of conflicts. Today we organized foundations, organizations whose are controlled genesis of the war among nations, societies preventing it’s flashing.
The other reason to the fix my point of view is American Crisis. When in 2008 American economy faced crisis, the government used macroeconomics concepts to revitalize it. Money was lavishly spent on social services; infrastructure and banks received bail outs. As a result of those government's actions, which were based on past experience, today state's economy prospers and thriving.
Further, in any sphere of science very important to know the past as well as, it gives a wide source to make vivid decisions which lead to make weighty results for development of society.
For example, let us consider medicine, only knowing the past duties about types of treatment of the diseases we can invent the better forms of solving health problem. And it is the incontestable evidence of the importance of knowing the past.
In conclusion, nobody can deny that the past knowledge is vital for any study as it gives insight into the consequences that happened before, also provides guidance and direction for future research.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 306.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19607843137 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94545803102 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6813765123 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315228583273 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110828428612 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12035412137 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168120148847 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13883235852 0.0667264976115 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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