Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Laws and legal system exist for common people to provide help and justice in need. However, many times these systems are failed to provide which is expected from them because of poor execution. Author claims that many of modern problems, faced by modern society cannot be solved by laws and legal system. The author states reason, laws and legal system cannot to change what is in people's mind and hearts. However, reason provided by the author doesn't quite provide complete reason for the problem and unable to identify the root cause.
Law exist to maintain order in the society, to serve justice to the right and punishment for the guilty one. The laws are most of the times made by the experts and various factors from society are considered at the time of constitution. They are always intend to serve greater good for the people and society. But there are many cases around us in which we can see that law is failed to address them correctly and timely and therefore, many people facing significant problems because of poor execution. Many time there are much larger factors are at play which are discreet to common people.
Similarly, many politicians and officials at higher posts influence the correct execution of the law by interference. It is common, many politicians charged with corruption have been vanished in thin air because of lack of proof against them. Many other trials protract for several years, even sometimes decades to get judgement from the court. Many high profile criminals use political influence to evade from punishments. There are vulnerabilities like lack of evidences, witnesses and other implied references to process criminal and charge punishment are often exploited, which are main reason that many people don't believe in justice served by courts.
It is correct that law cannot change what is in people's mind and hearts but it can heavily influence it by elegant execution of it and charge criminals when they carry out criminal acts. Serving justice as soon as possible should be the focus instead of prolonging time continuously, leaving people dubious about reliability of the law serving justice at right time. And people are also correct in their opinion, many times criminal frees almost all the time and after decade of investigation it is discovered that the defendant was guilty; but in cases criminal is dead before getting punished or many others have been victims of the same criminal. New generation is educated and understands importance of the law and order but demands correct execution of them.
Conclusively, it is not law that is culprit behind all the accusations, but the poor and delayed execution is. Serving justice right time and to right person is most crucial and therefore should be prioritized. Laws can change what is in people's mind and hearts by showing that it is reliable and people can trust the process to be equitable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The proper name in singular (Law) must be used with a third-person verb: 'exists'.
Suggestion: exists
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'intended'.
Suggestion: intended
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many times'.
Suggestion: Many times
...ant problems because of poor execution. Many time there are much larger factors are at pl...
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.5258426966 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2441.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04338842975 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54981363766 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464876033058 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3054577993 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.954545455 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.59090909091 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38115264638 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120851701475 0.0831039109588 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128774984418 0.0758088955206 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222049688573 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127664480897 0.0667264976115 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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