Claim: No act is done purely for the benefit of others.
Reason: All actions — even those that seem to be done for other people — are based on self-interest.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The quality which separates great personalities and philanthropist from ordinary people is "Selflessness" ! The cynical claim that "No act is done purely for the benefit of others", is false in very one sided in nature, as there are multiple instances that has happened in the past to contradict it However, there are some instances, in which a seemingly act of selflessness is not so disingenuous indeed.But even those act should not be criticized.
To begin with, The history is filled with example of people, who dedicated their whole life for the betterment of the society. The gave up all the materialistic things and social activities, things such as car, family, home, things that majority of people use to judge the so called "success" of a man's life, and relentlessly worked for the social causes. From Martin Luther king Jr. fighting against racial discrimination to Mahatma Gandhi fighting for the Indian independence to mother Teresa working for poor people of West Bengal, India., all are the epitome of selflessness.
Some people can claim that, even if these people gave for all the monetary benefit, they still worked because of there self interest to achieve something else such as political power or leadership role. Although, this may be a valid point if we see the example of people like Pandit Jawahar lal Nehru, a leading freedom fighter in India independence struggle, who later became the first prime minister of the country, still this is still a dubious claim. The fact that, he became a PM, does not prove that he did all the struggle, just to get political power, in-fact he never vouched for it, it was decided by the other leader that he should lead the country. Thus, it was the determination and his vision which led him to fight for his country. and not a selfish act of getting power.
Albeit, it is very much possible that, exception may exist. Many businessman like Mukesh Amabani or celebrities due philanthropic work just to build public image and get publicity. This positive image can help their business or movies through "positive branding" and increasing their acceptance among the people. But even if this is true, it does not matter much as long as they are doing something good for the society.For example even if a celebrity is building a school in order to just get some media attention, it is a good act and should be encouraged.
In conclusion, most of the people do philanthropy because they want to and because they believe in giving back to the society. There are countless people who have dedicated their life for the country and society. Although, exception may exist, still the act should be encouraged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0110864745 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98648638832 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534368070953 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.204557692 60.3974514979 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.25 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1875 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256820286211 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721099229454 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668777789816 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137435040235 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735310233084 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.