Claim: In order to help small business thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters.

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Claim: In order to help small business thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters.

There are many factors that decide whether a small business can thrive or not. Those include the economic trends, the products quality, the competitiveness of the industry, the leadership of the owner, or the support of the government. One claims that government should pay a minimal role in private business matters to helps them thrive. Though in some special and extreme cases, minimal role of government might release some stress for the business, in most cases it does not help them to thrive.

One example of the importance of government intervention is in restaurant business. If the intervention or requirement in food quality and sanity reduce in one particular area, many restaurants will be starting to ignore those requirements and food sanity when it comes their benefits. Hence, it will come a day that people become skeptical of their local restaurant food and prefer eating at home or eat out at other areas. This will make the restaurant industry in that area will lose a significant number of customers. On contrary, if the government have specific and strict requirements about food safety and sanity, people won’t have to worry about the sanity and judge the restaurant base on other performance, like the taste of the food, the service, or the location. By following the guidelines about food sanity, restaurants in the area have their customers trust and focus on their performance instead of trying to convince the customers about their food sanity. This will improve the trust between the customers and the businesses.

In additional, government role should not be minimal in the case of the competitive industry. For example, in the oil and gas industry, it is important that the government issue law and rules that prevent monopoly in the market.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, for example, in addition, in most cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10273972603 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80778479768 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520547945205 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6239429914 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208364227988 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937534277703 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15066505687 0.0758088955206 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188796140664 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164206711598 0.0667264976115 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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