Claim: In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters.
Write an essay in which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to use most compelling reasons and or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
While there is no doubt in the rule of nature that big fishes eat small fishes, as a nation of civilized human being, it becomes our ethical duty to protect the oppressed and stand against the oppressor. Unlike the exceptions like Mughals in India or monarchy in England, the government of any nation runs with a single motto of development and financial security and prosperity of all its citizens. And thus, the prosperity of small private businesses is usually the line of action of any government today. The government being in power has the power to protect them as well harm them. For that matter, without knowing the intentions and action plan of the government, broadly alleging them as a bane for small businesses is not justified.
Government actions might not look beneficial to the small businesses in the short term, but there are examples of government policies that have led to the improvisation of the small private businesses in the long term even when they were followed by objections from the business community of the nation. For example, when in 1990 Indian government announced liberalization of the Indian economy and set the market open and relaxed the trade tariffs, there was a fear amongst the business community that globalization would harm them and their businesses would suffer by making them compete against the giant multinational companies. However, the competition proved to be very healthy for the small businesses. They improved their standards and successfully made their grip on the market more firm than before. Eventually, India also started exporting wide range of goods and the domestic business along with the Indian economy as a whole flourished. This would not have been possible if the government would not have taken the necessary policy of liberalization of the market. Thus, this exemplifies how positive government role can be to enhance the small private business.
Along with the huge steps like opening market boundaries and making trade across boundaries economically viable and profitable for the investors, there are also myriads of ways in which the government can directly help and protect the small private businesses. For instance, the private metal extraction company Vedanta was bearing huge financial losses in the late 20th century and was about to shut, when the government came forward to aid them economically by forming a joint venture
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...tarted exporting wide range of goods and the domestic business along with the Ind...
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... economically by forming a joint venture
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'no doubt']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241626794258 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.131578947368 0.157235817809 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107655502392 0.0880659088768 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0526315789474 0.0497285424764 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0334928229665 0.0444667217837 75% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138755980861 0.12292977631 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0358851674641 0.0406280797675 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77572955387 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0191387559809 0.030933414821 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.124401913876 0.0997080785238 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0167464114833 0.0249443105267 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0167464114833 0.0148568991511 113% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2413.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 390.0 452.878318584 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.18717948718 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358974358974 0.366273622748 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.297435897436 0.280924506359 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194871794872 0.200843997647 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148717948718 0.132149295362 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77572955387 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 219.290929204 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528205128205 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 58.7002896058 55.4138127331 106% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 27.8571428571 23.380412469 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.4376105045 59.4972553346 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.357142857 141.124799967 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 23.380412469 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.674092028746 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.94800884956 61% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 57.6007326007 51.4728631049 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.91208791209 1.64882698954 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269924023278 0.391690518653 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.128680521866 0.123202303941 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0767066174695 0.077325440228 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.604235241122 0.547984918172 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139244655118 0.149214159877 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136143323535 0.161403998019 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058112290515 0.0892212321368 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.56931896913 0.385218514788 148% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0277163294897 0.0692045440612 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227075231437 0.275328986314 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117171497962 0.0653680567796 18% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.