In these days students have an umpteen number of choices for them to choose among variety of study field. Because of these variety of options, student might get toggled up into one or more than one option for their filed of study. And, as a demand of the globalized world, student are most likely to benefit if they have a choice to take additional courses along with their field of study. However, to go as far as to say that every student must be required by the university to attend those classes mandatorily, the statement becomes a contentious issue and different people will have different opinion. Some might suggest that it should be made compulsory while other might have a little laid back opinion to give the choice freedom to the student.
In the contemporary world today, an individual requires at least some knowledge from all field of study to survive. A person is not considered intelligent if s/he has great depth of knowledge on one particular subject unless s/he makes a ground-breaking invention in that field. This is a practical world and learning only literature is not enough most of the time. For example, a doctor is considered best at his work not just because of the theoretical knowledges he has but also the emotional quotient he possess that helps him/her connect to the patient. The emotional quotient or intelligence do not just pop along with the medical course but the variety of other different courses such as sociology, anthropology, etc. that leads a medical student in becoming the best at what s/he does. So, introducing other courses in the university should be open but again, not restricted.
Aside from having the necessity to have a basic knowledge of different fields, for the sake of the major of the fields of study. It is advisable to take another course as well because there is now to tell when one or the other course you took might come in handy. For instance, all we know is what a great outcome we had of Steve Jobs taking calligraphy lesson. Sure, it is completely different from his computer course but that is what made it outstanding as he was the only one in the team to suggest different types of font in the computer when all of his teams were busy mending logical and technical operations. A course outside your major widens your horizon and gives you the outer perspective even in your own field.
In all actuality, adding more courses to your major can be profitable. However, more the education procedure becomes professional, the less should other courses be required. Some fields of study are huge as it is, adding more courses will only distract the student from their actual field. Although there is no red line for deciding this course should go with that course, student must be clever in choosing the course of their study which will not distract themselves. And if universities make it compulsory for the student choose on or the extra course then the result might not be as the universities expect because without passion or interest any kind of course taken will go in vain.
In conclusion, although taking additional courses will help in developing multi-dimensional characteristics in student, it is not wise to abide the students in taking the course by the university. As the saying goes “Jack of all trades, master of none.”, we should not let ourselves distract from our major filed of study in between taking variety of courses.
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- Claim Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student s major field of study Reason Acquiring knowledge of various academic disciplines is the best way to become truly educated 66
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this variety' or 'these varieties'?
Suggestion: this variety; these varieties
...mong variety of study field. Because of these variety of options, student might get toggled u...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'possesses'.
Suggestion: possesses
... has but also the emotional quotient he possess that helps him/her connect to the patie...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sional, the less should other courses be required. Some fields of study are huge ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, while, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2839.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 588.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82823129252 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9242980521 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6861032214 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462585034014 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 901.8 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6623143031 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.291666667 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54166666667 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317633769221 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948289386936 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482169030313 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187463952172 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441186701353 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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