Jobs are uncertain in the market. The jobs that are abundant in number might be very few in the future and vice-versa. When it comes for the interest there is a proverb which states as “always listen to your heart” which elucidates as do whatever you want. Thus, students must chose the field of interest they want to study without being omnious. It is always joy to do work that you love. The ultimate goal of the person in future is to be satisfied with their work. One who loves the profession he/she feel work as a play that provides them a joy and enormous satisfaction. If the job becomes out of their interest one always feels arduous and agony regarding their job.
No any jobs in the field are worst and awesome. There are numerous examples that the person are satisfied with their job; also, numerous examples some hates. The students who are best in their field will surely find job. The best are always rewarded with job. No any job in the field are more or less valuable; that’s the person who defines them.
There is no certainty that the availability of certain field remains same in the future. For example, the demand of civil engineer is too high in the market in the recent phase but there might not be much demand in the coming future. There might be the demand of architect in the coming days and which we can still feel same about it. There was high demand of civil in 2010’s but as the time passed the hype of architect is more now. Thus, there is no any certainty in the job.
The field of interest always pushes ones to be the best. One can self-motivate them for the work and its always exciting to start the job with a beautiful vibes. No any job in is smaller or greater for the one who has voracious predilection towards the job. If the one has voracious appetite to be barista, they surely love to design the art in coffee. The one who’s dream is to be accountant will surely enjoy their job as a bank manager. The same you ask a physicist lover about their current job as a bank manager, he/she will surely hate it.
Thus, the one who has a deep feeling about their field, they must follow their dream without being ominous. The one who love their field of study will surely be better in the future. The better the person with their empirical skill the better and satisfied the future will be.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: abundant
...ertain in the market. The jobs that are abundant in number might be very few in the future and vic...
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Line 1, column 505, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...rk. One who loves the profession he/she feel work as a play that provides them a joy...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: Now
...arduous and agony regarding their job. No any jobs in the field are worst and awe...
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Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: Now
... The best are always rewarded with job. No any job in the field are more or less v...
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: IN_1990s[2]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 2010’s'.
Suggestion: in the 2010’s
...bout it. There was high demand of civil in 2010’s but as the time passed the hype of arch...
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Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...f architect is more now. Thus, there is no any certainty in the job. The field of...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'vibe'?
Suggestion: vibe
...iting to start the job with a beautiful vibes. No any job in is smaller or greater fo...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: Now
...o start the job with a beautiful vibes. No any job in is smaller or greater for th...
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Line 4, column 361, Rule ID: WHOS[3]
Message: Did you mean 'whose'?
Suggestion: whose
...ve to design the art in coffee. The one who’s dream is to be accountant will surely e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, still, thus, for example, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42691415313 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21056833586 2.79657885939 79% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410672853828 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0898030794 60.3974514979 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.6666666667 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.962962963 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.51851851852 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223644077205 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722570355037 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463071376356 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135398793538 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489516863377 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 14.1392134831 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 48.8420337079 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 12.1639044944 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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