Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Colleges and Universities are the holy places where a students develops cognitive skills, logical reasoning, and general understanding. Students learn most of their life long skills, abilities from colleges and universities as they are the final stages in shaping a carrier of a individual. The author asserts that academic institutions should urge their faculty to spend some time working outside the academic world in professions that are germane to the courses taught in colleges and Universities.
First of all, Faculty spending time working outside the world in professions can understand the practical use of the academics by self-observing the working platforms. They can have a profound insight of the actual relevance of the courses and can in longer run modify the course curriculum and guide their course as the the requirements in the professions. They can establish the relations with the individuals from the firms, industries and companies and ultimately increasing the chances of the students from the colleges and University to join them as intern, and some work experience. For example, Agriculture and forestry University of Nepal, has collaborated with PMAMP of government of Nepal, which takes students from university as research internee increasing the productivity and skill of both project and students.
Secondly, if a faculty spends time working outside the academic world in professions he/she can garner knowledge from wide range of areas enabling them to carry out a large holistic research projects that will be beneficial for community. It will help the faculty to have a integrated understanding of a topic and will develop the critical thinking and reasoning on their academics. He/she can garner knowledge from wide range of areas and can potentially guide children in paths generally not known by the academician. They can also derive out some potential areas that have not been explored and can be exploited which can potentially benefit the human beings. For example, if a researcher wants to do a research on climate he should collaborate scientists and professionals of different fields, to do these kind of integrated and holistic research the faculty should be able to understand other professionals relevant to their courses or research.
Thirdly, although spending time outside may be beneficial , however, in some cases the faculty may be attracted by the nature or salary for the other professions and may join them and this may impede in the process of teaching-learning. The faculty may not be able to able to understand or study the contemporary research ultimately reducing the level of education system. For example, a professor if works on a industry for more than say 5 years then the professor may lose credibility due to lower number of publication as he will not be able to perform research activity while working at the industry at the same time.
In conclusion, the benefits offered by requiring faculty to spend time outside working in the professional world outweighs the disadvantages offered. so, i mostly agree with the authors assertion and conclude that colleges and universities should require all the faculty to spend time working outside academic world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
... Universities are the holy places where a students develops cognitive skills, logical reas...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he final stages in shaping a carrier of a individual. The author asserts that aca...
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Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...se curriculum and guide their course as the the requirements in the professions. They c...
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Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...se curriculum and guide their course as the the requirements in the professions. They c...
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Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'large holistic research'.
Suggestion: large holistic research
...nge of areas enabling them to carry out a large holistic research projects that will be beneficial for co...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...unity. It will help the faculty to have a integrated understanding of a topic and...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enefit the human beings. For example, if a researcher wants to do a research on c...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...r example, if a researcher wants to do a research on climate he should collaborate scient...
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Line 3, column 805, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...rofessionals of different fields, to do these kind of integrated and holistic research the...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... spending time outside may be beneficial , however, in some cases the faculty may ...
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Line 4, column 260, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'able to'.
Suggestion: able to
...aching-learning. The faculty may not be able to able to understand or study the contemporary re...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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...m. For example, a professor if works on a industry for more than say 5 years then...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ld outweighs the disadvantages offered. so, i mostly agree with the authors assert...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...es offered. so, i mostly agree with the authors assertion and conclude that colleges an...
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Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re all the faculty to spend time working outside academic world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2714.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 511.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31115459883 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02733870967 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454011741683 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 860.4 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9080722948 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.647058824 118.986275619 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0588235294 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 5.21951772744 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317385710168 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118424951418 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949620339629 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210516018455 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833792433491 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
... Universities are the holy places where a students develops cognitive skills, logical reas...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he final stages in shaping a carrier of a individual. The author asserts that aca...
^
Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...se curriculum and guide their course as the the requirements in the professions. They c...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...se curriculum and guide their course as the the requirements in the professions. They c...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'large holistic research'.
Suggestion: large holistic research
...nge of areas enabling them to carry out a large holistic research projects that will be beneficial for co...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...unity. It will help the faculty to have a integrated understanding of a topic and...
^
Line 3, column 678, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enefit the human beings. For example, if a researcher wants to do a research on c...
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Line 3, column 705, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...r example, if a researcher wants to do a research on climate he should collaborate scient...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 805, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...rofessionals of different fields, to do these kind of integrated and holistic research the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... spending time outside may be beneficial , however, in some cases the faculty may ...
^^
Line 4, column 260, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'able to'.
Suggestion: able to
...aching-learning. The faculty may not be able to able to understand or study the contemporary re...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 410, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...m. For example, a professor if works on a industry for more than say 5 years then...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ld outweighs the disadvantages offered. so, i mostly agree with the authors assert...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...es offered. so, i mostly agree with the authors assertion and conclude that colleges an...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re all the faculty to spend time working outside academic world.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2714.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 511.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31115459883 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02733870967 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454011741683 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 860.4 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9080722948 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.647058824 118.986275619 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0588235294 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 5.21951772744 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317385710168 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118424951418 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949620339629 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210516018455 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833792433491 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.