The concept of cooperation rather than competition prepares young people for leadership
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
leadership is the ability of one to direct and lead the people and their efforts for the achievement of one common goal. people are not innate leaders but they become leaders after years of hardwork and experience. As a nation, a society , r a group of individuals a will be completely lost without a strong leader despite having all the resources. but society should prepare the leaders with the sense of cooperation and not the competition.where cooperation means taking everyone along with for the achievement of a common goal, competition means leaving everyone behind so that only one person can achieve a destined goal.
competition leads to personal development whereas cooperation leads to overall development of the society or the persons related with.I completely agree to this prompt as the society should prepare it's leaders with sense of cooperation and not competition as such a preparation will lead to the overall development of the society and it's constituents i.e. the people.
leaders in any sectors might it be Government, industrial, commerce should move ahead with cooperation. they should adopt democratic ways of working where each and every individual should contribute their due and thus leads to overall development of the stakeholders.
A leadership where there is a sense of competition among its constituents will lead to a sophisticated ambience where everyone is indulged in a cut throat competition to move ahead and throw everyone behind by any means necessary.This only leads to overall development of one candidate and there will be only the survival of the fittest.
The best example of cooperation can be seen in a sports like cricket where the team play as one and everyone will play well for the winning of team as a whole and not of any specific player. The captain drafts the strategy keeping in thought the whole team and not keeping in mind of any specific player.
great leaders have always emphasized on the teamwork and cooperation, even seen in many cases that big democratic elections are won with a great sense of leadership and teamwork where everyone is putting efforts in a cooperative environment for the win.
great revolutions are successful when leaders have shown a sense of cooperation among themselves. any nation can fight a war or any epidemic when leaders and their followers are cooperative with each other and if they had shown competitiveness among themselves it would have been tough for them to achieve a success because there will be no common goal and people will selfish to achieve a higher position thus ;leading to a collapse.therefore i strongly agrees with the prompt that society should prepare leaders with a sense of cooperation and not competitiveness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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leadership is the ability of one to direct and lea...
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...k and experience. As a nation, a society , r a group of individuals a will be comp...
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...eader despite having all the resources. but society should prepare the leaders with...
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...eration means taking everyone along with for the achievement of a common goal, co...
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...ompetition means leaving everyone behind so that only one person can achieve a de...
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... person can achieve a destined goal. competition leads to personal development whereas c...
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...l lead to the overall development of the society and its constituents i.e. the ...
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...rce should move ahead with cooperation. they should adopt democratic ways of working...
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...onstituents will lead to a sophisticated ambience where everyone is indulged in a...
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...cooperative environment for the win. great revolutions are successful when le...
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...rative environment for the win. great revolutions are successful when leaders...
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...are successful when leaders have shown a sense of cooperation among themselves. a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2309.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15401785714 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04667454491 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424107142857 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 728.1 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.257870883 60.3974514979 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.615384615 118.986275619 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4615384615 23.4991977007 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158714515354 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060822685849 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438761138283 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847483874468 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392607124087 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 14.1392134831 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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