Creativity is a passion of every artist. artist feel the beauty of nature.then they express his tellings. artist express their feelings through words, pictures,music as well as films.
I strongly agree with the statement creative artists should always give freedom to express their ideas. They can do better lonely. Artist want to silence environment when they create something new. Firstly , they feel the beauty of nature then they create something. They can find their hidden talent. Government should have to support them. They can gain money from their creativity. They can express their ideas with in flow as well as feel factor. They can easily express natural beauty with any restriction. Real expressions and feelings are very pleasant. People feel relax and do enjoy with these types of creativities.
On the other hand, sometimes artist goes on wrong track. They feel fearless and express everything. Sometimes songs give bad message to youth. Misuse of freedom hearts religion as well as culture and tradition. However, government should provide funds to artist. Artist can express beauty of the world and Nature.
In the epilogue, creativity plays a vital role . without it we feel boring. Life is dull without creativity. Government should given freedom to creative artist.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Artist
...reativity is a passion of every artist. artist feel the beauty of nature.then they exp...
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...ty is a passion of every artist. artist feel the beauty of nature.then they express ...
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Suggestion: Artist
... nature.then they express his tellings. artist express their feelings through words, p...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , music
...s their feelings through words, pictures,music as well as films. I strongly agree w...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... when they create something new. Firstly , they feel the beauty of nature then the...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...as with in flow as well as feel factor. They can easily express natural beauty with ...
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Suggestion: .
... epilogue, creativity plays a vital role . without it we feel boring. Life is dull...
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Suggestion: Without
...ilogue, creativity plays a vital role . without it we feel boring. Life is dull without...
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Message: Did you mean 'have given' or 'give'?
Suggestion: have given; give
...l without creativity. Government should given freedom to creative artist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, then, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 58.6224719101 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35784313725 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57069430782 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 215.323595506 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 704.065955056 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 8.0 23.0359550562 35% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.272278287 60.3974514979 29% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 45.5416666667 118.986275619 38% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 8.5 23.4991977007 36% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321603489342 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10000747139 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761789045285 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190644727569 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063574469896 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 14.1392134831 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.82 48.8420337079 147% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 12.1743820225 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.74 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.8971910112 34% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.2 11.2143820225 46% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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