Those great art masterpieces are known to the world not by critical judgment of their time, but by the descendents' judgments. In the field of art there is no distinct boundary between right or wrong, since beauty is an immense form of humen's self recogization. Yet in some fields, experts indeed play an important role. Their points of view could possibily decide whether a finding or a patent or a invention will be cherished by all. However, the fact is the even the expert in that field are reluctant to acclaim one's works, some of them still would be regarded as important and excellent. Thus I could fully agree with the statement due in great part to its assertion's being to absolute.
To begin with, some critical judgments made by experts on artworks are not accurate. In the long crystal river of human's art history, many great works could not be fully understood and were overwhelmed by wheels of history. Years later when people took a look bach at their needy ancestors, they are shocked by not only their works but also their fates, most of which are tragedies. Van Gon, the greatest painter of 18th century as well as the founder the impressionision, is one of the best instances. His art works were regarded as orthodox,and criticized by other artists in his time. Beethoven lived a poor life and suffered terrific adversity especially in his late life due in great part to the other musicians' indifferent attitude towards his works.
Despite those examples in art, there are many famous events in the field of science. A huge amount of great scientists are jeered and laughed at because of their new theories and inventions. Since the people in academy are arrogent, they always argues on one unnecessary point with each other for a long time. Some experts laughed at Geolenue's theory of center of universe, and the reason is absurd: their are devout Christians and they believe the religions creed which underlines that the center of universe is Earth. How could those experts' judgments has any value to the work?
And finally, even some experts are judging fairly, other's judgments also make a difference. For instances, some video games are ranked very high by the reviewer who are experts reviewing games. However, the players do not feel the same way. They might find the game boring and criticize it on the social networks. And the players' friends read the judgments and decide not to purchase the game. That's why some games' sell is low although they are rated high. The value of judgments sometimes does not depend on the profession but on other unexpected factors.
In conclusion, the statement argues that only experts' judgments have value is too assertive. Whether a judement is valuable depends on time and most importantly, people themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...decide whether a finding or a patent or a invention will be cherished by all. How...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... in that field are reluctant to acclaim ones works, some of them still would be rega...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...be regarded as important and excellent. Thus I could fully agree with the statement ...
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Suggestion: That's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, so, still, thus, well, even so, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 472.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89618644068 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58419607242 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540254237288 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4208632439 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8846153846 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80769230769 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180280337371 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488054773713 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434268985223 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991033727523 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237938027751 0.0667264976115 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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