Corporations maximize their profit at the cost of the welfare of the people and the environment of the country.
The greed to make more profit often results in corporations resorting to unscrupulous practices which prove to have an adverse effect on people as well as environment. Many corporations try to get their way around many rules that regulate proper disposal of factory wastes, this results in contamination of the environment with pollutants which can be harmful for people, animals and plants. Noxious discharges into the water bodies can poison animals and spoil crops if used for irrigation. In an attempt to get cheap raw material corporations damage the environment by excessive mining and deforestration. The damage cased by such actions has a lomg lasting affect on the well being of the nation.
Corporations often try to increase their profit by infringing on worker's rights. Workers are made to work for very low wages and in unsafe working conditions. They may be forced to work long shifts without any breaks, this often causes the worker's health to deteriorate. In an attempt to get cheap labour corporations are lured to engage in human trafficking and slavery. The workers are smuggled in from many countries illegally and are made to work in return for a very low maintainance cost.
Another technique used by corporations to maximize their profits is to produce substandard products. They use cheap and low quality raw materials to reduce the input costs, while selling the product to the customer at high rates. This substandard product can often fail to perform its function and cause damage to the user. Substandard food products can cause food poisoning that can result in death of the consumers. Face creams with low quality raw materials often cause rashes and damage the users skin. The only party benefitting from this is the corporation that makes money at the cost of the welfare of the consumers.
The desire to make more and more profit can result in corporations resoting to many illeagal and unscrupulous practices. These practices need to be kept in check by the government otherwise they can result in destruction of the nation by greedy corporates.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ers rights. Workers are made to work for very low wages and in unsafe working con...
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Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...thout any breaks, this often causes the workers health to deteriorate. In an attempt to...
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...countries illegally and are made to work in return for a very low maintainance co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06906077348 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83242943642 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494475138122 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9482091704 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.5789473684 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0526315789 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.89473684211 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119924930446 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410652050342 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393964451563 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802154713948 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376209709319 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.