Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed
education is more important to anyone in their lives. Because it gives us the knowledge and power to think correctly. To acquire knowledge there is only one way. that is to be educated.Everyone has their own meaning of success in their life. someone has that success means acquiring money. someone has acquiring knowledge.someone has doing service to the people.One of the reasons of success is somewhat related to the career that they have chosen.
some students want to pursue their studies in some college without any knowledge of the course. some students have the knowledge of the course but they don't know which school or college they have t choose.some students have both. The responsibility of the educational institutions is that they give better guidance to students and create the way.
some students want to pursue their career in some field. but they are not suitable for that field. it is the responsibility of the educational institutions to tell them the reasons why they are not suitable for that career. also the institutions give them a choice to find another type of career. Not only their judgement is last but if student doesn't want change the career and he or she thinks they will succeed then institutions may give encouragement and support to the student.
some students don't get marks in their tests. but they have interest in some particular in some field. So educational institutions has a responsibility to bring out the talents of the students,encourage them to go into their interested area.
Not only the educational institutions have that responsibility but also as parents they have responsibility too. parents have to think about the career of their child,what are their child interests and which way he wants to go. By knowing all these limits parents must give some guidance to the child for growth and beautiful career.
students have some dreams about their future.but they have only some knowledge about it .So,I think it is the responsibility of both the educational institutions and parents to persuade the students to in their fields of study. And also they dissuade the students who does not fit to the particular area of interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02486187845 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98754192165 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.414364640884 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5464972649 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6818181818 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.68181818182 5.21951772744 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368168486456 0.243740707755 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119652142436 0.0831039109588 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098602837419 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222157571238 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985448876774 0.0667264976115 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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