Educational institutions are backbone of society. All young people and elders have lots of hopes from these institutions as they are building the future of our country. Each individual have their own perspective towards life, choosing hard to achieve field is not wrong or bad choice. Institutions should encourage students to choose the field of their interest and should respect their choice.
First of all, You can be successful if you give your 100% that means putting your mind and hard work in it, choosing field without interest in it might be successful but it wont suffice your mind. It wont give you a satisfaction.
Educational institutions should encourage students to choose the fields which are they are interested in. Nothing is hard if work so hard to achieve it, success is yours.
However,univercities should restrict students if one have totally different background in the past and not trying to achieve totally opposite field of study.For example If student have computer science background and wants to be banker.In such case institutions should dissuade the students to not pursue the fields. Because our education system have some structure which help to students to build their career from scratch. It Helps them to build their career on strong foundation base from very small age.
Finally, Universities should make available whatever the best option is out there. Without discouraging the student, college professor or advisors should convince students how choosing the right path can be great help in their career.
Our whole life is dependent on what choices we make. Choosing our career path of our interest and putting all efforts to make successful is big achievement in life.While doing so Our educational system play a very important role in it.Without our institutions its hard to live our life with quality.So institutions should always be supportive of students and encourage them always.Instutions are for people ,people are not for institutions.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: edsonsimoes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...your mind and hard work in it, choosing field without interest in it might be success...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , univercities
... achieve it, success is yours. However,univercities should restrict students if one have to...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...achieve totally opposite field of study.For example If student have computer scienc...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ience background and wants to be banker.In such case institutions should dissuade ...
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Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the students to not pursue the fields. Because our education system have some structur...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...e successful is big achievement in life.While doing so Our educational system play a ...
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Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Without
...system play a very important role in it.Without our institutions its hard to live our l...
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Line 7, column 300, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... its hard to live our life with quality.So institutions should always be supportiv...
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Line 7, column 375, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...pportive of students and encourage them always.Instutions are for people ,people are n...
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Line 7, column 382, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Instutions
...e of students and encourage them always.Instutions are for people ,people are not for inst...
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Line 7, column 407, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ge them always.Instutions are for people ,people are not for institutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, so, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 317.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30283911672 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94685180407 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523659305994 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.1263057995 60.3974514979 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.066666667 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186427562785 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747096919333 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678707686662 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104072144509 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569930091414 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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