Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study in which jobs are plentiful.
Choosing fields of study is the most important decision to be taken in studen't life which is driven by many forces. However, the author claims that the education institution should encourage the students to choose in which jobs are plentiful. This direct conclusion is a chicanery as this process of making decision about the field of study which is laid as a foundation for later years isn't this easily equatable with only one factor of jobs. There's a need to profoundly analyze the process and its consequences which will lead us to collect a set of factors which will aid in this substancial decision making process in student's life.
Our lifestyle is greatly influenced by our earnings which is directly related to our occupation. The fields of study with plentiful jobs would be a safer space considering there will be no dearth of jobs. For instance, if one looses a job in the field where there are always openings, it is easier to find another job. On the other hand if everyone uses this equation by choosing career paths in the same stream based on a plentiful jobs the day wouldn't be farth when the industry would be filled to the brim and wouldn't be able to accept new joinees choosing this field.
Additionally, at the end of the day, everyone wants a happy and peacefull place. Hence, choosing fields of study just based on the jobs might lead to stress if one doesn't like the work or job they're doing. Work stress are one of the major concerns in today's lifestyle which is one of the major reasons for many diseases which is to be taken care of immediately. Hence it is important to choose a fiekd of study which gives the satisfaction. But, on the other side it is not always necessary that one's good at what one likes doing and if the person lacks patience and integrity he might stop following passion and which will again lead to a stressful life due to a disturbed career path.
Furthermore, whatever field of study we choose it is important that we grow, both in the field and as a human being. If one's not learning daily then they're in the wrong path. Consider, a student chooses a field of study on the basis of the plentiful jobs and if the scenario of pleantiful jobs remain the same then they'll get a chance to grow because as plentiful jobs imply more opportunities which in turn implies growth. But considering everyone chooses the same stream, implying dearth in the incoming students for other fields, which will lead to more opportunities due to the lack of new joinees in the field.
While this essay propounds how life is dependent on the earnings which is dependent on the job, however it also claims how happiness and peace is the ultimate goal of life which can be achieved by doing what one loves. How can educational institute assist student in choosing fields of study then? In some sense, it is important to go into the field where there are no lack of opportunities as there's always a place of growth. However, it is also important to do what suits one the best as the path suited for one might not be the ideal path of other. It is important to find paths for yourself rather than choosing one while calculating risks and predicting the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2636.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 571.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61646234676 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50309324924 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430823117338 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 810.9 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2380587555 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.818181818 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9545454545 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37512473692 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130497882648 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120592560425 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226506791884 0.150359130593 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069361768469 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.