Educators should find out what students want included in the curriculum and then offer it to them.
he author asserts that educators should embrace students’ feedbacks and incorporate them to the curriculum. While the inclusion of the students’ suggestions with regards to the planning of the curriculum may bring about some advantages, the educators should also consider the undesirable ramifications if this policy were to be implemented. Although I concur that students’ feedbacks are vital for educators to perfect their curriculum, educators should only accept constructive suggestions and sieve out those which does not help to ameliorate the current curriculum.
Incorporating students’ suggestions into the curriculum and offer it to them, will allow students’ weaknesses to be addressed celeritously. In this time and age, students do not only passively receive information from the educators but also have to constantly hunt for knowledge from journals and references. In the process of doing so, students may discover certain areas of the curriculum they are particularly vulnerable. With the educators being cognizant of the students’ weaknesses, it will therefore aid the educators to redress the curriculum which will then specifically address those issues immediately. This will not only ease the educators’ troubles but also reduce the time taken to identify their students’ weaknesses.
Students are more interested in their studies if they are provided with a curriculum that they have a predilection for. As such, with students being more willing to commit and study with alacrity, the educators will most definitely witness an improvement in their grades obtained. Similarly, educators may also find themselves in congenial position to teach if their students are eager to learn. This creates an ideal situation where students are eager to learn and educators are pleased to indoctrinate those that are hungry for knowledge.
Nevertheless, educators should not remiss the disadvantages when they are amenable to their students’ suggestions. Educators, especially the more experienced ones, have a more lucid direction of where the curriculum should be heading than their students. Some students may only want topics that they consider interesting to be included in the curriculum while eradicating those that are vapid and trite. Unfortunately, those banal chapters that the students have the inclination to skip over are sometimes critical for their knowledge. For instance, students that are adept at solving mathematical equations may find writing essays a banality and hassle. However, it is vital to equip the students with the skill to analyze an issue and pen down their thoughts to write a cohesive prose. If the educators were to allow students to skip learning this precious set of skills, the students may most probably find themselves in a predicament when they are asked to write a personal statement or a report for instance.
In retrospect, although offering the students what they want for their curriculum may reduce the time taken to identify their weaknesses and heighten their enthusiasm when it comes to their learning, one should also consider the drawbacks such as oblique interests in certain areas of the curriculum and neglect those banal topics that may be equally or more critical to their studies.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
he author asserts that educators should em...
^^
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'authors'.
Suggestion: authors
he author asserts that educators should embrace s...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2775.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 502.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52788844622 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03153808669 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454183266932 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 867.6 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1439591856 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.75 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359571520646 0.243740707755 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124127274347 0.0831039109588 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654118107724 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212554805776 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623137379097 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
he author asserts that educators should em...
^^
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'authors'.
Suggestion: authors
he author asserts that educators should embrace s...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2775.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 502.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52788844622 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7334296765 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03153808669 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454183266932 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 867.6 704.065955056 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1439591856 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.75 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359571520646 0.243740707755 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124127274347 0.0831039109588 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654118107724 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212554805776 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623137379097 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.