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The tension between whether government officials should be bound by the will of the people or whether they should have the autonomy to make their own decisions is a fundamental question of vital importance in any democracy. On the one hand, it is indubitable that one of the key roles of a democratically elected government is to uphold the views and values of a nation's people, and significant aberrations from this guiding principle represent a conspicuous violation of that government's electoral mandate. However, it is too simplistic to suggest that the actions and decisions of elected officials should be fully constrained by the will of the people; in such a society, one would effectively be conducting public policy in all situations by a majority vote of the public. To this end, while it is vital that officials are guided by the will of the people they serve, a balance is required between respecting the sovereignty of the people and granting these officials with the requisite autonomy to exercise their leadership roles effectively.
In conceptualising the fundamental role of elected officials, it is worthwhile to recall the following oft-repeated but aphoristic quote about democracy from President Lincoln: "Democracy is government of the people, by the people, for the people." As Lincoln makes manifest, the identity of democracy is inextricably linked to the will of the people. In a similar vein, the great economist Milton Friedman commenced a speech with a series of provocative questions: "What is government? Who is government? Do governments have responsibility?" Friedman subsequently answered his own question with the pithy observation that "governments don't have responsibility; people have responsibility". Drawing the threads together from these ideas, it is evident that democracy, via the conduit of electing representatives, permits individuals - the constituent members of society - to exercise their collective will. The upholding of this core tenet, and by extension, the value of democracy, therefore hinges upon whether government officials adhere to their mandate from the people. If elected officials are given free reign to implement their agenda, irresponsible government could potentially flourish, and a putative democracy could steadily devolve into dictatorship and totalitarianism.
Yet one must recognise that elected officials must be given a certain degree of freedom to make their own decisions, without which it would be impossible to administer any coherent form of government. Several political economists, including the Nobel laureate Kenneth Arrow, have explored the need for elected representatives in a democracy "governed by the people", and have rationalised this necessity as due to the conflicts, or 'externalities', inherent to individual decision making. For example, consider a hypothetical society in which government funding is to be allocated to different regions. If elected representatives were strictly bound by the will of the people, it might turn out that only a small number of people would vote for funding to be allocated to each specific region, making it impossible for a majority to support any individual funding decision. The appointment of leaders ameliorates such issues by streamlining these externalities and creating an overarching body, that is, government, to implement the visions of individuals as a cohesive and streamlined whole.
In drawing the threads together, we can examine the financial crisis of 2008 as a case study in point. Under pressure from the public, lawmakers such as President Barack Obama and Federal Reserve Chairman Ben Bernanke were under severe pressure from the public to resist the temptation to bail out failing banks and instead adhere to a mindless free-market ideology. Yet Bernanke and Obama recognised that a failure to act would be tantamount to complete destruction of the US and eventually the global economy, and against the public will, adopted a course of action that was to prove of paramount importance in preventing ubiquitous economic collapse. To this end, we can see that elected officials have a certain tacit responsibility to not conform to the public will and instead do what is in the best interests of their nation in times of crisis to avert catastrophic future ramifications. In short, we elect representatives to regulate, at times, the basest instincts of humanity, to prevent collapse, and to sustain stability and peace.
Thus, government, in its best form, is guided by the will of the people, but is not a mindless adherent to the views of the public. Elected officials must certainly respect the mandate by which they were appointed to office, but to allow government, and by extension, society, to run effectively, officials should be afforded a certain degree of autonomy to deliver an implementation of this public mandate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.4196629213 209% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 33.0505617978 136% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 125.0 58.6224719101 213% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4175.0 2235.4752809 187% => OK
No of words: 760.0 442.535393258 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49342105263 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.25053306857 4.55969084622 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35607823771 2.79657885939 120% => OK
Unique words: 356.0 215.323595506 165% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468421052632 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1336.5 704.065955056 190% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 12.0 1.77640449438 676% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 16.0 4.38483146067 365% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5724634252 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.52173913 118.986275619 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0434782609 23.4991977007 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.60869565217 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.243740707755 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0831039109588 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150359130593 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 14.1392134831 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.06 48.8420337079 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.38706741573 120% => OK
difficult_words: 232.0 100.480337079 231% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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