The author states that individuals should be responsible to obey laws which are fair and to reject or resist others that are unfair. I completely agree with the first part of author`s claim of the author. However, in order to disobey a law, there must be a challenging reason for that.
First of all, all individuals should agree on the laws of the society where they decide to live. Laws are extremely important in many aspects. As they preserve stability and pursue equality in the community. No one could imagine how is the streets with car drivers are breaking the traffic? Also, laws are needed to pursue welfare and prosperity of the economy. Moreover, by applying rules, people can live safer.
Thus, people should accept to follow the law whether they believe being just or unjust law. Because laws are put by politicians who are elected by us through an election process. So, Even if someone saw a law as unjust to follow, it would be imprudent of him to break it. To illustrate further, nowadays, breaking the traffic has become a cherished tradition. As a result, if we let people judge on traffic laws, they would surely break the traffic signals and cause many accidents.
On the other side, there are some cases in which people should resist certain laws. For example, if the law is against the public demands, then people should resist that law. Recently, people in France filled the streets after president Macron had revealed the law of manpower. Protesters were angry because the law was opposing the demands of workers with adding more burdensome taxes. After a short period, the law was canceled because the majority of French people was against it.
To sum up, people should agree to follow laws of their country to achieve welfare and success. However, there are conditions in which we should or should not disobey the law.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... they believe being just or unjust law. Because laws are put by politicians who are ele...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 318.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84591194969 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42192471289 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.9176308365 60.3974514979 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.380952381 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220276026947 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660578930932 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594515555037 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130626281146 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605057349148 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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