Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and
resist unjust laws.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with
the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most
compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Almost Every country’s constitution is made diligently and carefully by a group of well trained and educated officials. Thus the rules made by this very constitution will be refined and developed in such a way that further additions can be invoked as when required depending upon the developing status of the nation. Hence the rules and rights provided by the constitution should be followed by everyone.
The notion of just and unjust varies from person to person. When certain rules may seem just to a certain group of people, it may seem unjust to another lot. For example, the “ Triple Talaq Bill” passed by the Indian Government has a ambivalent opinion from a majority of people and few others consider it to be just. If the people start only following just laws according to their perception, then there will be chaos and tumult within the country that might lead to internal dissection. Nevertheless there might be certain laws, that might be a very big thorn in the society. Such rules can be removed by constant persuasion by the people on the government, since the constitution can accommodate depending on the relevant demands of the people. Also many international organizations can also help in this very same matter. There has been many instants in which certain rules have been added on, like the voting rights to the women in most of the countries.Many countries are still struggling for getting upgraded status for women, from getting a driving license to be able to vote. So sometimes, not following a rule that is supposedly unjust in a person’s perspective can bring about a change. Being a germane issue becomes a cherry on the top, else its just causing unnecessary turmoil within the nation.
Education is a main factor that can help people in guiding what is relevant and what is not. The country’s people decide what type of government it will have and what type of rules will be implemented. Being a citizen of a country, its our duty to follow the rules and respect the country’s constitution and bring awareness about relevant rules that removes the most unjust laws from the constitution
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
...on the developing status of the nation. Hence the rules and rights provided by the co...
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...that might lead to internal dissection. Nevertheless there might be certain laws, that might...
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95567867036 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86293147652 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501385041551 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.314185202 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8125 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103366170486 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376181088133 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219771650429 0.0758088955206 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702650472001 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257939109514 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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