Increasing the time devoted to local and weather news might not help to attract more viwers of late-night news program.
Firstly. we dont know what exactly the complaints of viewers were about. It is possible that the viewers did not complain about the decrease in the time devoted to local and weather news. It is likely that they did not like the content of the weather and local news. For example, they could have complained about the business advertisements.
Secondly, the reason of cancellation of contract between local business and television station is not known. The reason might not be the decrease in the amount of time given to local and weather news. Also, the amount of time devoted to local news and to weather news might haven't been commensurate. More specifically, the proportion of time devoted to weather news might have been more compared to the amount of time devoted to local news.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
- ISSUE TOPIC: The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment. 58
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- ISSUE TOPIC: The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 2235.4752809 34% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 154.0 442.535393258 35% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94155844156 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 4.55969084622 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55858164294 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 67.0 215.323595506 31% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435064935065 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 704.065955056 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0222651222 60.3974514979 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5555555556 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424219062969 0.243740707755 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203435739835 0.0831039109588 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126460932821 0.0758088955206 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326283841334 0.150359130593 217% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981038548058 0.0667264976115 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 100.480337079 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.