The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company.
"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company (SSMPC) makes the claim that the recent decline in movie viewership could be improved by increasing the SSMPC advertising budget. He/she also claims that, since the percentage of positive reviews increased in the last year, that people who do attend SSMPC films enjoy those films, and the lack of viewership is due to lack of exposure to advertising, rather than some other factor (such as an increase in ticket price). Lastly, the advertising director makes the claim that money spent on advertising would bring in more customers, and implies that this will increase SSMPC profits (assuming that this is the advertising director's goal). In this essay, I will explore the veracity of these claims and highlight what questions would need to be answered in order to support or reject the advertising director's claims.
The advertising director's first claim--that the decline in viewership is due to poor advertising--rests on shaky ground. There are several other factors that could contribute to a decline in viewership. Among these factors are a decline in the economy (and therefore less leisure spending), a low-quality year in film (e.g. unpopular movies being produced), or an increase in ticket price (leading to lower ticket demand). In order to investigate the true source of the viewership decline, data on the economy, film-quality (via film review websites like IMDB), and historical ticket prices--at SSMPC and nearby theaters--would be required. Furthermore, SSMPC's choice of what films to screen could also be a factor in declining viewership. If SSMPC has been screening unpopular movies, it is less likely that a bigger advertising budget will bring individuals in to see undesirable movies. This would actually cause the advertisement director's plan to backfire, and would likely lead to a decline in profits.
The advertising director's second claim is that, since positive reviews for SSMPC's films are increasing, it means that the popularity of its films are also increasing. This claim, however, does not account for "selection bias" among viewers. If, for example, half the individuals in 2015 gave SSMPC's movie's a 1 out of 10 review, and the other have gave it a 10 out of 10 review, if the individuals who gave SSMPC movies a 1 out of 10 movie stopped attending their films (and therefore stopped leaving reviews), the average review score would jump from 5.5 to 10. This would make it appear as if SSMPC movies are increasing in popularity, but would actually indicate attrition of a certain type of viewer that does not enjoy SSMPC films. To evalulate this claim, the advertising director should collect data on the film ratings of customers who have stopped attending SSMPC films, i.e. those that are responsible for the decline in viewership. If the viewers who no longer attend SSMPC films provided lower average ratings of their films than those who are still attending, it would damage the credibility of the claim that the popularity of SSMPC's films is increasing.
The last claim of the advertising director is that money spent on advertising would bring in more customers, and increase the profit of the SSMPC. This makes the specious assumption that film-consumers are succeptible to advertising and that the main reason they are not attending SSMPC's films is that they have not been exposed to SSMPC's selection of films. If the decline in viewership is due to increased ticket prices, a bad economy, a bad year in film, or selection of unpopular films by SSMPC, advertising is unlikely to fix the problem. Ironically, increasing the advertising budget could actually decrease the profits of SSMPC due to money wasted on ineffective advertising, if the source of viewership decline has to do with affordability or film popularity. To test the advertising director's claim, he/she should convene an advertising test groups of both patrons who have stopped attending SSMPC and patrons who have never been, and test their responsiveness to advertising. If old SSMPC patrons are unaffected by advertising, the advertising director should focus the advertising budget on new patrons. If neither are affected, increasing the advertising budget will be a waste of time and money.
In conclusion, while it may seem reasonable to interpret the simultaneous decline in viewership and increase in positive reviews with an inadequate advertising budget, without the data sets listed in the prior paragraphs, the advertising director's claims may be false and increasing the advertising budget may not be effective in increasing viewership and profit for SSMPC. To assume that the decline in viewership does not lie witht the quality of SSMPC's films, but with the public's lack of awareness is to make a crucial mistake. To make an informed decision, the advertising director should collect data on movie patron's historical viewing habits, historical reviews, and larger economic trends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 358, Rule ID: GAVE_GIVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'give'?
Suggestion: give
... 1 out of 10 review, and the other have gave it a 10 out of 10 review, if the indivi...
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Line 9, column 358, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
... 1 out of 10 review, and the other have gave it a 10 out of 10 review, if the indivi...
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Line 9, column 444, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'movie' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'movies'.
Suggestion: movies
...als who gave SSMPC movies a 1 out of 10 movie stopped attending their films and there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, e.g., first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, second, so, still, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.4196629213 209% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 102.0 58.6224719101 174% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4191.0 2235.4752809 187% => OK
No of words: 798.0 442.535393258 180% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25187969925 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.31496884127 4.55969084622 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93277661929 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 298.0 215.323595506 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.37343358396 0.4932671777 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1258.2 704.065955056 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 12.0 1.77640449438 676% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.02414241 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.222222222 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.62962962963 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140112454318 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483836719463 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453313476634 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924041846463 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036463104392 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 14.1392134831 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 100.480337079 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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