Government should offer college and university education free of charge to all students.
The statement states that free education should be given to all the students who are admitted to the college and universities which is not realistic as in country like India or any other with huge amount of youth population giving free education to every student of every college or university is impossible. Instead it could be better if scholarship or education aids are given to students looking at their eligibility for it.
Being completely dependent on the government aids for the bachelors or masters education in university or college is not proper. As education is a huge expense this days and can not be full filled for everyone by the government. There are countries like USA in which a significant portion of the government income comes from the education sector because of the students coming to the USA for the higher education. Imparting education to all of them free of the cost would not proper way. As tax payers would be paying money for the foreign students. Instead aids should be given to those who really are in need of it. There are many needy who are not able full filling their wish of studying because of the lack of money. They should be given help.
Students should be offered opportunities to work in the sector they are pursuing their higher studies. so they can earn some money for the daily expense. On the basis of their performance in academics the scholarships should be continued or discontinued in the next term. It should be not completely on the basis of the academics only but students should also be good at extra-curricular activities.
Though there are many countries in the world that are offering free school education to all students of that country. This is wise step as no students drops out of the school for the lack of the money.
Providing such kind of aids to the school students can reduce the students drop out rate significantly. Therefore increasing the literacy rate and building the better society with less criminal activities by the juveniles.But in the case of the college it is not necessary to have a higher education for everyone. Sometimes giving free education to every college students can force them to study as they don't have to pay the fees. And can ultimately lead to improper use of the aids provided.
The government should provide on the basis of the area in countries i.e suppose a backward area in the country where the level of living is low and people are more under the line of poverty. The students who want to study ahead and having a good academic performances should be provided with some special scholarships so that people of that area grow and prosper. Because if few people are doing well after studying and getting help from the government it will instigate more people to study to well off and improve condition of their city and area.
Hence government should give free education for universities and colleges students but not for all for only those who are needy and deserving candidates. Those who are getting it should maintain or improve in the virtue of getting it ahead in next academic terms. And those who are not getting it can improve their academics or overall performances to get it.
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- TOEFL T P O 29 - Integrated Writing Task 3
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- Argument Essay"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year , fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year.And yet the percentage of positive reviews about specific Super Screen movies have 29
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2658.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 552.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8152173913 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6605627803 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.400362318841 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 850.5 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6647783003 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295080209591 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862647620373 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902270087515 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155446884939 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677383993714 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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