Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
The world has been in problems and many chaotic situation that has to be handled by the government itself. Moreover, handling the problem in hand tends to reduce the problems that can take a major role in the future burgeoning itself. For this the government should first handle the impending problems than forseeing it with the anticipated problems of future. I agree with the author by the following reasons.
Firstly, The cases of problems like abortion, gay marriages , starvation, etc. These are highly remonstrated by the general public. Because of these, chaos is spreading in most of the parts of the world which can also disbalance the state of the country.
For example,one of the most recent noxious disease that had spread was ebola. This disease killed many of population of the country. Moreover, the dengue which was epedemic in whole Africa, which also swayed away the African population. The government by fortunate could apply effective medical treetment so these disease could stop after comparatibly less harm than predicted. The problems on hand should be solved as soon as possible before turinng itself to catastropic.
In addition, there was a rumor that our world was going to be destroyed or disseminate by 2012. Moreover, films were also produced relating how the year 2012 be the end of living beings in earth. Also, it was promulgated that Maldives is going to be drowned by upcoming 10-20 years. These types of future events can be hypothesis or can occur which is not known beforehand. So we cannot keep our 100% manpower and materials to focus on the future problems that may occur or may not . As mentioned in the second paragraph, those problems are the relevant and more dangerous in compare to these future predictions.
Although, there are may be other problems that the scientist have shown like depletion of ozone layer, proven by pictures and many experiment, these are sure to happen. These are categorical to occur due to the on going malpractice or pollution, and noxious gases from industries and many more. These are to be reduced to great extent to protect the ozone layer and maintain the life in earth. So, there may be the problems that may occur which has evidence, which have to be in the focus of the government. However, the government should first control the the problems of current situation while using less amount of its resource for solving future anticipated problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of problems like abortion, gay marriages , starvation, etc. These are highly remon...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...c. These are highly remonstrated by the general public. Because of these, chaos is spreading i...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , one
... the state of the country. For example,one of the most recent noxious disease that...
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Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this disease' or 'these diseases'?
Suggestion: this disease; these diseases
...ld apply effective medical treetment so these disease could stop after comparatibly less harm...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...before turinng itself to catastropic. In addition, there was a rumor that our ...
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Line 9, column 488, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...uture problems that may occur or may not . As mentioned in the second paragraph, t...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...compare to these future predictions. Although, there are may be other problem...
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Line 11, column 131, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experiment seems to be countable; consider using: 'many experiments'.
Suggestion: many experiments
... of ozone layer, proven by pictures and many experiment, these are sure to happen. These are ca...
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Line 11, column 216, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...ese are categorical to occur due to the on going malpractice or pollution, and noxious g...
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Line 11, column 558, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...er, the government should first control the the problems of current situation while usi...
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Line 11, column 558, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...er, the government should first control the the problems of current situation while usi...
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Line 11, column 677, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or solving future anticipated problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, as to, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99262899263 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62903840727 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511056511057 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6931887175 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.347826087 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6956521739 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.34782608696 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235346354814 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679466109045 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953220730961 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136024727368 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870712432494 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.