We are in the world where there are lots of problem. There are basically two kind of countries developing and developed. Developing countries have lots of problem. some are short term and some are long term problem. Government need to really work hard for these countries to address these problems. Author above prompts government should solve immediate problems which are in fact short term problem rather than long term future problem. I slightly disagree with the prompt but it depends on many factors. To substantiate my points following reasons and examples are presented.
Firstly, government task should focus more on substantial development rather than addressing short term issues. This is important because for the developing countries, they tend to have small budget and resources to work with. Government officials have to be prudent while using budget and resources. For example, somalia is a developing country where there are lots of long term issue, such as low literacy rate, high unemployment rate etc. If a government has a choice to maintain condition of existing road or to construct new roads then I think government should increase the time period cycle of maintainance of existance roads and use that budget to construct new roads first, which is a long term goal. Such decision in my view is a prudent move for sustainable development. Somalia like countries can't estimate budget for every thing sufficient ly. So, government should be very prudent taking decission on allocating budget and resources for development works.
However, sometime government should address immediate problem considering citzens sentiments or can be other reasons as well. To explain this we can relate to the event that happend in Nepal. Nepal cricket players without proper stadium and being underdog push their ranking to the point where they can play odi games but to play odi game, Nepal should have proper functional stadium. This was really frustating for cricket players of Nepal that they don't have a stadium though they put lot of effort to be in odi club. Citizens sentiment was to have a good functional stadium. Although Nepal being a poor country allocated some budget to built it though Nepal has lot of other problem as well. So, some time looking up the circumstances goverment need to address problem which may or may not be future productive and even if that is a minor problem comparing to other problem of the country.
To sum up my idea, most of the time government should focus on sustainable development and look up to the long term future problemm but looking up to the circumstances government should be flexible as well occasionally.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
We are in the world where there are lots of problem. There are basically two kind of countr...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
...ots of problem. There are basically two kind of countries developing and developed. ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kind' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kinds'.
Suggestion: kinds
...ots of problem. There are basically two kind of countries developing and developed. ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
...d developed. Developing countries have lots of problem. some are short term and some are long ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...eloping countries have lots of problem. some are short term and some are long term p...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'termed'.
Suggestion: termed
.... some are short term and some are long term problem. Government need to really work...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...If a government has a choice to maintain condition of existing road or to constru...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ble development. Somalia like countries cant estimate budget for every thing suffici...
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Suggestion: don't
... for cricket players of Nepal that they dont have a stadium though they put lot of e...
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Suggestion:
...tances goverment need to address problem which may or may not be future productiv...
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Suggestion:
...ring to other problem of the country. To sum up my idea, most of the time gov...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'circumstances'' or 'circumstance's'?
Suggestion: circumstances'; circumstance's
...m future problemm but looking up to the circumstances government should be flexible as well o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, really, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, i think, in fact, kind of, such as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2235.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10273972603 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71328277581 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474885844749 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.8600892719 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191633029825 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570988874812 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745619619642 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124328202418 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651089386378 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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