The aforementioned issue topic is indeed controversial.Whether a government should focus on the current scenario or plan for future issues is rather a mind-boggling topic.Nevertheless,a government is a body which functions equally for a countries development and prosperity by taking into consideration it's present situation.I, therefore,opine that any government should focus on future problems only after tackling the immediate problems faced by it's citizens.
To begin with,there goes a saying - "Tomorrow never comes."Time passed is time lost.Hence, the problems faced by people of any country should be considered and acted upon by the particular nation's government in that particular time span.If a country's challenge is to eradicate a particular disease say-Tuberculosis.Then the efforts should be started right when the problem arises i.e. when the disease is swiping away the lives of people.
Secondly, many a times circumstances are such that confuse the ruling body.A striking example which can be considered is when a country is facing major unemployment and simultaneously scientists are planning for a research endeavor which needs huge capital investment.Although profusely confounding, such clause can be addressed upon by first aiming to reduce the unemployment rate by and later on accumulating adequate funds for the research work.If one takes a careful insight of this matter,one can deduce that definitely boom in the employment field can in a way help in proper fund raising for research activities.As people with their perseverance and dedication can surely contribute in strengthening the economic sector.
However,it is equally important for a government to concentrate on anticipated future problems as well.An example of natural calamities can be looked upon.If under the excuse of solving current issues a governing body is overlooking the future problems then it can end up utmost misery.If a countries geographical locations are such that it is prone to earthquakes and no adequate measures are taken by it's government,one day it may lead to mass human loss.
In a nutshell,it is wise enough for any government to first address today's issues by keeping an eye on the future issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58579881657 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59778746248 2.79657885939 129% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57100591716 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 23.0359550562 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.589719352 60.3974514979 319% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 377.6 118.986275619 317% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.6 23.4991977007 288% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 5.21951772744 441% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 7.80617977528 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168179068603 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925875263308 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523528919483 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925875263308 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523528919483 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.7 14.1392134831 274% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.45 48.8420337079 -28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 12.1743820225 261% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.33 12.1639044944 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.86 8.38706741573 141% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 11.8971910112 269% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 11.2143820225 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 11.7820224719 272% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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