The statement that Government should focus on immediate problems rather than foresee problems is controversial.A Government is a ruling body that should lead the country in a path of development by following the regime and facing the obstacles, for the country to moveforward.However, the present affects the future and cannot be considered disparage.Every government encounters problems throught out the year.For Instance, inadequate transport facilities in populated countries, faced by public everyday, destitution, dormant economy and these problems might require immediate solutions.The anicipated problems may be global warming,the downfall of the countries industries,service and trade effected by a countries present imports,exports or cognigence in the public.
To begin with,immediate problems like destitution as mentioned above is a subject with requires exigent attention.These problems would sabotage poor people life's and their dreams to lead a better life and neglecting poverty also might inert the countries growth.Additionally, Government Should work for the betterment of life of a commonman by providing him with minimum requirements to move forward.Furthermore, Corruption is also a problem that countries like India faces which supresses the growth of the country and require solutions to free the country from corruption.
In contrast,foresight is required to obviate the future problems and can be solved more efficiently if government has anticipated them and took better steps to preclude.For example,when there is a omen of cyclone in a region,the government can send the residents of that region to a safer place rather than to rescue them after the occurrence of the calamity.Most importantly, Government foresight in warfare has a great advantage.If we look at countries like Syria that are currently in a civil war, they can protect the refugees of syria who are moving to other counties for a better life if they have a anticipation of future and the reasons behind the war.Another example would be global warming where many might disagree that the occurrence of such an event is way too far and there are many important problems to concentrate on yet,global warming would damage the planet sonner or later.
It is a too wide topic to take a stand and support one because a government should solve the problems on present day and also it cannot neglect the future consequences.In one way the government has to solve the problems faced by a country or region to reach the future and flourish.Althought government cannot slove all the difficulties faced by the public due to lack of proper protocol or economic problems.
To sum it all,Government is a body that should solve the problems faced and also not completely neglect the future and work only for the betterment of today.This balance would help the country grow and also stand as an example for many other countries.After all the role of the government is to govern the country and help the public.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'after all', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in contrast', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265225933202 0.240241500013 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.163064833006 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0785854616896 0.0880659088768 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0471512770138 0.0497285424764 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0196463654224 0.0444667217837 44% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104125736739 0.12292977631 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0333988212181 0.0406280797675 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.4603921206 2.79330140395 124% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0333988212181 0.030933414821 108% => OK
Particles: 0.00196463654224 0.0016655270985 118% => OK
Determiners: 0.127701375246 0.0997080785238 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0353634577603 0.0249443105267 142% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176817288802 0.0148568991511 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3003.0 2732.02544248 110% => OK
No of words: 469.0 452.878318584 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.40298507463 6.0361032391 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398720682303 0.366273622748 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311300639659 0.280924506359 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232409381663 0.200843997647 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.181236673774 0.132149295362 137% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4603921206 2.79330140395 124% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 219.290929204 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477611940299 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 54.2108424054 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6194690265 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 93.8 23.380412469 401% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 210.215698748 59.4972553346 353% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 600.6 141.124799967 426% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 93.8 23.380412469 401% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.6 0.674092028746 386% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.21349557522 595% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 124.930063966 51.4728631049 243% => OK
Elegance: 1.75213675214 1.64882698954 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.514744844565 0.391690518653 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.358111300176 0.123202303941 291% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0841082232293 0.077325440228 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 4.00296604249e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.375533122363 0.161403998019 233% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585896737554 0.0892212321368 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.454632060655 0.385218514788 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0732477642939 0.0692045440612 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.375533122363 0.275328986314 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585896737554 0.0653680567796 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.4325221239 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.5995575221 37% => More topic words wanted.
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6