The statement says that people’s behavior is dependent on the forces around them rather than their own thoughts. This statement indeed true and we all are definitely influenced by the circumstances around us. However, there is a slight difference on how we base our choices in a situation is given below.
Firstly, from the time we are born, we learn and grow up by the different circumstances that led our life. As an infant we don’t know how to make a decision and it is definitely based on the parent choice. With their help we learn and develop. As an adult, a person choice may still be according to the forces around him. For example, a person might undertake a job after 18 years if his family is poor and cannot afford studies. In situations like this the forces around him/her determine the decision they make.
However, if we look deeper in to the topic then there raises a point called “wrongdoing”. In our world today, may crimes take place either small or big. They often start in a commonplace where he or she may not have a criminal background. Yet, some people go against the law even though they are not influenced by the forces around them and make their own choice. This is one example where a person is not completely influenced by the forces and yet makes bad decisions.
If we take an individual’s career in to consideration. He or she is pushed by different forces around, however, they might take a decision of their own choice as they have the discretion after reaching a certain age. Indeed, making an own decision is a person’s choice and they will always have that option. For example, we wouldn’t have great scientists like Galileo galilei who in spite of coming from different background, did not let them affect his decision making. However, many a times people are drawn away by the forces around them.
To sum, yes, people choices are determined from by forces than to their own making. However, an individual may make different choices by his own gumption as mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding forces'?
Suggestion: the surrounding forces
... that people’s behavior is dependent on the forces around them rather than their own thoughts. This st...
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding circumstances'?
Suggestion: the surrounding circumstances
...and we all are definitely influenced by the circumstances around us. However, there is a slight difference ...
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding forces'?
Suggestion: the surrounding forces
...person choice may still be according to the forces around him. For example, a person might undertake ...
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding forces'?
Suggestion: the surrounding forces
...afford studies. In situations like this the forces around him/her determine the decision they make. ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the forces and yet makes bad decisions. If we take an individual’s career in to co...
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding forces'?
Suggestion: the surrounding forces
..., many a times people are drawn away by the forces around them. To sum, yes, people choices are det...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'for example', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.193384223919 0.240241500013 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.157760814249 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0661577608142 0.0880659088768 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0636132315522 0.0497285424764 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0941475826972 0.0444667217837 212% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.129770992366 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0381679389313 0.0406280797675 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67729854132 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0152671755725 0.030933414821 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00254452926209 0.0016655270985 153% => OK
Determiners: 0.101781170483 0.0997080785238 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0203562340967 0.0249443105267 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0152671755725 0.0148568991511 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2032.0 2732.02544248 74% => OK
No of words: 354.0 452.878318584 78% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74011299435 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338983050847 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.206214689266 0.280924506359 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158192090395 0.200843997647 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104519774011 0.132149295362 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67729854132 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 219.290929204 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505649717514 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 53.3986952211 55.4138127331 96% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.8571428571 23.380412469 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3324829809 59.4972553346 49% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7619047619 141.124799967 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 23.380412469 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52380952381 0.674092028746 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 37.4786117837 51.4728631049 73% => OK
Elegance: 1.14516129032 1.64882698954 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330631085694 0.391690518653 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0964480467127 0.123202303941 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0740563634644 0.077325440228 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.466587243776 0.547984918172 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118836949097 0.149214159877 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119442191381 0.161403998019 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463636484137 0.0892212321368 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.320878501771 0.385218514788 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0435354938534 0.0692045440612 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215888694856 0.275328986314 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501349580558 0.0653680567796 77% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88274336283 225% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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