Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
We can all agree that the government has a major responsibility to ensure that a country's citizens receive all the acquired necessities in order to satisfy their needs and well-being. this can be applied in various aspects including artisitc and military purposes. Although it is true that governmental investmen for military purposes is essential in order to ensure the safety and protection of a country from ourtside forces, the government has a similar role in order to ensure the well-being of a country's individuals from within; this iis based on the terms of education as well as artistic activities and culture.
art is considered as important as any other aspect in society, for the development of artistic talents and ambitions of individuals would encourage to become engaged in the more hidden aspect and nearly forgotten of a society. In fact, in most educational institutions, art is being viewed as a frivolous program which does not require the interest of students.
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...ell as artistic activities and culture. art is considered as important as an...
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...mbitions of individuals would encourage to become engaged in the more hidden aspect and n...
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...not require the interest of students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, in fact, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 58.6224719101 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 2235.4752809 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 160.0 442.535393258 36% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.175 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 4.55969084622 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03415453628 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 215.323595506 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 704.065955056 38% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.0926420293 60.3974514979 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.6 118.986275619 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.21951772744 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0606341117884 0.243740707755 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306808165922 0.0831039109588 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0170135444486 0.0758088955206 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0471420100673 0.150359130593 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105551389384 0.0667264976115 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 14.1392134831 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 48.8420337079 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.1743820225 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.