Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Mankind has been practicing arts for thousands of years. It promotes creativity and is recognized all over the world. Michael Jackson, a legend of dancing inspired many people all over the world in the art of dancing. The government must provide infrastructure and opportunities for the people to pursue arts. Schools of art established by governments have brought realized the dream of many people to become artists.
Although investing in arts is a good decision, it is not possible to send artists to fight against threats for the country. The government must invest in military to protect the country from external and internal threats.
One of the main responsibilities of the army is to protect the borders. The Indian Government has instituted the Border security force (BSF), to patrol the borders and prevent infiltration of enemies and terrorists. The security force has been successful in preventing thousands of incursions and illegal entries to India and has won over 1000 medals of bravery.
The army, navy and air force requires a lot of sophisticated tools and equipment in order to function effectively. To illustrate, the army would need powerful scanners to detect incoming missiles and nullify them. Furthermore, each military plane and aircraft is worth hundreds of thousands of dollars.
The soldiers would also need a lot of training to combat terrorism, sea piracy, naxal activities effectively. The soldiers should be trained in all kinds of terrains and should be able to handle grave situations with craftiness. The NSG commandos who fought against the terrorists in the 26/11 attack in mumbai had the uphill task of eliminatng terroists and rescuing the hostages.
Even though arts is important for the culture of a nation, the government must invest in military more to protect its interests.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...has won over 1000 medals of bravery. The army, navy and air force requires a lot...
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Line 9, column 230, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...andle grave situations with craftiness. The NSG commandos who fought against the te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 33.0505617978 12% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 293.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26279863481 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93496705495 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569965870307 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1326358984 60.3974514979 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.7058823529 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.47058823529 5.21951772744 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107234750299 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323527752358 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317214006062 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541096362818 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356205632787 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.