Research paves the way for future inventions . If scientists were not engaged in research , then there would be innumerable things which would have been unknown to us. It is also a blessing in disguise that government gives utmost importance to these scientific research such that researchers could efficiently could do their work. This prompt recommends that governments should restrict themselves from providing any fund to scientific research as the consequences are quite unclear. In my opinion, it is a matter of debate and I mostly agree with this idea. The following two reasons are my thoughts in this regard.
Each and every research has its own unique result. But this result could take the positive or negative side . If the outcome has negative consequences , then it would not only affect people who are engaged in it but would also affect its surroundings . And this is a very common scenario for any scientific research and as a result of that government faces the unwanted consequences and have to go out of their way to cover up the consequences . For instance, nuclear power and consequently, nuclear weapons has been the deadliest inventions of all the time . Even though it was invented for good cause, the outcome has made a huge negative impact on human lives. Now governments not only played a meaningful role in protecting human lives , but also funded a lumpsum amount of their budget in the development of this research . If the research of nuclear power and thereby , nuclear weapons would be have been scotched at the initial stage , then government would not have to work so hard on saving their nation .From this, we can say that governments should not provide any fund to scientific research whose outcomes are obfuscating and can get easily deflected.
But this might lead to another unwanted consequence . If government does not consider any fund for scientific research in their budget , then we might miss out many useful and unique inventions. For instance, if the governments restrict themselves from investing in space research , then it would a big loss for human kind as we will be forever deprived from the knowledge and interesting and valuable information about planets , stars and our solar system . Also threats like asteroids cannot be anticipated and many more . If governments abnegate funding on scientific research , then the desired outcome may not be fruitful.
It is not an inevitable fact that scientific research will have lucid consequences , but there are certain times where financial aid provided by government on these researches could be extremely helpful for the society. However, we cannot make a concrete decision as this is a matter of debate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, then, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2253.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 442.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09728506787 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82926712622 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497737556561 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8283599093 60.3974514979 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0476190476 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223754234069 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714306926377 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545517489953 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14796721298 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444471289565 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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