Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all the students

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Governments should offer college and university education free of charge to all the students

Education is one of the fundamental pillar of the society. The society will be far better with equal opportunity to the education. Therefore, government should make eduction free in colleges and universities for all the students.

The education loan puts most of the students in financial stress. This compels them to take up the job right after the college instead pursuing their research and higher education. Whereby depriving the society from any possible invention, useful to humanity. Free education will have the positive impact not only on the students but also on our society.

In support of the statement, free education can allure top talents from international community. With top talents, not only our research will thrive but also our society will get the good of their societies as well. Hence taking a leap in holistic development.

However the statement will be slightly weakened if the international students choose to return to their homeland. Nevertheless, free education will help our society positively.

Education will always play a pivotal role and will be the key differentiating factors between societies. By making, the education free to all the students, we will not only uplift the financial burden from the students but also foster our society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...et the good of their societies as well. Hence taking a leap in holistic development. ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...aking a leap in holistic development. However the statement will be slightly weakened...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.3162921348 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 2235.4752809 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32019704433 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87091973177 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 215.323595506 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6704185286 60.3974514979 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1428571429 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255182020461 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957430236865 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105482973311 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157201126649 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808291555533 0.0667264976115 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.8420337079 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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