Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Education is a birthright of every student and government should not leave any loose ends in order to provide help to their citizens in order to gain good education. As it is the students who will pave a bright future of a country if they are provided with good education. The speed with which the world is advancing it is very important to be highly educated in order to be at par with everyone and to be able to sustain in this competitive world. Therefore, I believe that government should offer free university education to certain very bright students who cannot afford them , as to offer free university education to every student who cannot afford will not be a very viable solution for an efficient government.
Government should offer free university education to very bright students and could offer partial scholarships to the rest of the students who cannot afford university education. As for a university to have enough resources to run a technology and knowledge advanced university , it is very essential to have students who can pay the fess. Therefore, a university can create a balance by maintaining a fixed number for the students who can be provided free education or partial scholarship.
Governments can also come up with various scholarship policies in which they could provide scholarship loans to certain students . After a student is done with his/her graduation he/she would require to pay off his loan in certain parts by working for the government. Students in Singapore are provided with this policy and it has helped various students to attain education and achieve success in their life and colors for there country.
Therefore, a government should help his students to attain university education by offering them various policies if they are capable of doing really well for themselves and the country.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'as for', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238390092879 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.164086687307 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0928792569659 0.0880659088768 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046439628483 0.0497285424764 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.046439628483 0.0444667217837 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.108359133127 0.12292977631 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0340557275542 0.0406280797675 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82028640872 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0588235294118 0.030933414821 190% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0061919504644 0.0016655270985 372% => OK
Determiners: 0.0835913312693 0.0997080785238 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0495356037152 0.0249443105267 199% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0247678018576 0.0148568991511 167% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1853.0 2732.02544248 68% => OK
No of words: 307.0 452.878318584 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03583061889 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.384364820847 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296416938111 0.280924506359 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221498371336 0.200843997647 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14657980456 0.132149295362 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82028640872 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 219.290929204 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442996742671 0.48968727796 90% => OK
Word variations: 43.0813498223 55.4138127331 78% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6194690265 53% => OK
Sentence length: 27.9090909091 23.380412469 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0206558237 59.4972553346 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.454545455 141.124799967 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 23.380412469 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 0.674092028746 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 57.5507847202 51.4728631049 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.48192771084 1.64882698954 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386399600824 0.391690518653 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.208015927639 0.123202303941 169% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.14646799809 0.077325440228 189% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.636974255462 0.547984918172 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147979917732 0.149214159877 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187509254765 0.161403998019 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858848735598 0.0892212321368 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.347757763102 0.385218514788 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113137201615 0.0692045440612 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26220125885 0.275328986314 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898660029154 0.0653680567796 137% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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