Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and
development.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing
and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the
recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples
shape your position.
development is what that differnciates a human being from a wild animal. we use elements in our surrounding to make our life hassle free.as the human society progressed
so did our heirhorcy. in this modern time people elect leaders who main job is look after the citizen of there country and help them process.without significant development
humanity will be again pushed back to stone age.
government should not have impose any strigent laws in place that hamper the development of citizen . it should incentivize companpies that does research and
development in the feild of science. by doing so they can save cost on research and development . the money saved can be allocated to other departments. these programs
tends to create industrial complexies where there is public private paternship. these type of arrangments are very common in democratic government where government tells
about there requirement to private companies and the company tend to design the product accord to there needs. this leads to a large scale employment which directly
helps a country grow its economy. this sames time and moneywhich can be used in some productive way like making rules and regulations that improves the life of citizen.
the best example of public private paternship can be found in the united states of america especially in the defence sector. they relase there requirement about the
product that they need which is given to companies which comes up with ideas and solutions. most of the iconic fighter jets,arms and amuration,space missions were borned in this way.
the automobile industry of america is the next best example. the government incentivized car manufacturers by making laws less stringent . this lead to boom in this industry
which currently employees millons of people.
on the contraty, government should impose restriction on things that are threat to safety of citizen. the most common topic that comes to minds when talking about
government interference is pharmasutical industry. medicines are tool for a long and healthy life. there government agencies that regulate this industry. once a drug is
found or synthesised its effectiveness is test. to test its effectivness they are tested on lab rats. these results are send to the consurned authorites which decide
wheter the drug should be approved for human testing. after regarus testing on human bodies if there are any hazardous side effects the drug is not allowed to be
releasd to the public. thus we can be sure that the medication available at the pharmasutical store is safe for human consumption.
when there is research on any topic which tends to improve the everyday life government should not not interfear in these matters. rather should assited them
with all guidance and help requaired. this help the government free up resources which could be sured elsewhere. it can also lead to formation large companies like apple, google,
microsoft which employes a huge number of young talents. but when public safety is put into question without any doubt government should enforce stringent resctriction.
research topics like medicine, nuclear energy where national and public security is at risk should be done under government . the government agencies should sit down
with reasearches and list all the possible ways to test the product so as to see is it safe for public use.
- Governments should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and development Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take In develop 50
- Governments should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and development Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take In develop 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, as to, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2853.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 544.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24448529412 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81866857025 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520220588235 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 882.0 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.802590026 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4545454545 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4848484848 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 5.21951772744 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.97078651685 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 60.0 7.80617977528 769% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179995685502 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04929226957 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458203696315 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577510300798 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455473302172 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.