How can one person decides the greatness of individuals? One persons greatness can not be decided by those who live after them also who are their contemporaries because who lives after them can not pass the statement that they are great but who are they contemporaries or lived with them also responsible for deciding their greatness.
The result of what we did in our life is may be seen by our death. So, if we did good work it will reflect our work as good manners and may be some people make their idol us and will do work like us. For instance society could not accept the concept of revolution given by Charles Darwin who gave the theory of evolution of men that are in the apes. But after years now we are taking that theory as a results in our solution. So, this will make a common man to a great scientist. There are many Scientist like Thomas Alva Edison who discovered the bulb and that is the big revolution in our life but he get success not in a first try he tried many times on that time people are talking that this man is wasting his time and hating that man but after innovation of bulb people are considering him as a great scientist. So, for some person people are considering of them greatness of them by after them.
On the contrary, in field of of other like music, entertainment and art the great people are recognized by their contemporaries or who lives with him because that great personalities are here and all can see their works and consider them as a great artist, or musician. As they can see that how that person are trying to do their work with all great efforts what can they make to do their work all their hard work, their preparation are visible to all their contemporaries. If we take example like Lata Mangeshkar, Kishore Kumar their are phenomenal in their work that's why that time also people admired them as a great. Even this time also we considered them as a great people as a greatest of all time,
The efforts take by soldiers for guard their nation is also appreciated by their contemporaries because what they did for their nation all work see by their contemporaries and that's make them as a great personalities and make them their idol for doing that work. Because their contemporaries are in good positions that considered them as great compared to who lives after them. So, That's why even their contemporaries are also play a vital role for making them great.
In the end i would like to tell that the as above we can see that the greatness of individuals can not be decided by who lives after them because there are also who worked great on their time and even their peer also taking them as a great. So, that's why greatness of individuals can be considered by who lives after them and also their contemporaries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ple like Lata Mangeshkar, Kishore Kumar their are phenomenal in their work thats why ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, for instance, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 83.0 33.0505617978 251% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2272.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 507.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48126232742 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57106776628 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.34516765286 0.4932671777 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 712.8 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.7120465132 60.3974514979 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.647058824 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8235294118 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.515562390425 0.243740707755 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223926740137 0.0831039109588 269% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181899253825 0.0758088955206 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.397897467724 0.150359130593 265% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.194047155827 0.0667264976115 291% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 12.1743820225 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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