high speed communications media, such as electronic mails and televison, tend to prevent meaningful and thoughtful communication.
Communication is very important in each and everyones life, knowing the things that are happening all around the world just by one touch through technology is a huge turn towards modern communication. I disagree, technical and social revolution has made easy for every individual to communicate in each and every corner of the world providing meaningful and thoughtful communication.
The main reason behid my agreement is television and any electronic gadget provide effectively fast and real time data, which are failed to provide by daily news paper. For example, a cyclone strikes in california in 2017, the real time live data and news can be obtained and broadcasted worldwide through television. All the people all around the world can watch it. Moreover it also provide the precautions and rescue techniques during forecast before disaster.
In addition, communication can be done with the help of social media now days and a file or data can be sent to any person. Email are the main and first source of communication online. Video call and voice call can be easily done with the help of high speed electronic device. For example, to send a message to your friend or to communicate with one just one tap and it is send. Now a days people even give interview for their job online through video call, which saves time of people by avoiding physically going to the firm.
The newspaper was the means of communication netween the country and the people before technological revolution take place, but now to view and news people read it online rather than buying a newspaper. Communication through electronic devices saves time of the people and works effectively.
Though, the communication through social media sometimes can be harmful due to many hakers out their, so privacy is the main concern and it is not there upto some level. It can also be used to misguide the people in directions which they do not belong.
Thus, the communication through electronic media and televison and both of its advantages and disadvantages, but if it is used effectively and efficiently, it is most powerful mean to communicate in todays life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...a, which are failed to provide by daily news paper. For example, a cyclone strikes in cali...
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Line 4, column 370, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ople all around the world can watch it. Moreover it also provide the precautions and res...
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Line 4, column 387, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
...he world can watch it. Moreover it also provide the precautions and rescue techniques d...
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Line 6, column 375, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
...unicate with one just one tap and it is send. Now a days people even give interview ...
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Line 6, column 381, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...e with one just one tap and it is send. Now a days people even give interview for their jo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05042016807 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89291604987 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2414627036 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6875 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171172233494 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559369759753 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543551030488 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931990547498 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548435380779 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.