how to descide your field of study
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The following will discuss the mirge and the dismerge of the subject .
some believes that the availiability of the jobs is more important to your field of study.
they say '' look money is the most important factor for studing ''
every person involve in collage for being scholar and gain skills , so at last you get money.
doctors are rich , so i will be a doctor , Thats a good example for how some thinks.
however, this flaws as getting money is related to how good and skillfull you are in your job.
if you are a good doctor .otherwise, you will be rich and get money.
looking for money as a main factor and reason in our lives will blind us .
On the other hand some believes that fields of study is based Subsequently on talents And interests .
yea , i agree . if you are interested in your field , you will be extraordinary . Be effective like Eienstien .
you think of something you are eager . and want to flourish your mind of what is modest and new.
in addition , the more you like what you study , the more you get high marks .
this carried once , when The Magasine newspaper published a statistics about how talents affects you performance in job , 85 percent of views declared that ''indeed'' it is important .
money is important .however, it is not everthing .
to conculde what i want to say
we shall base our descions on what we love and enthusiastic at .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, thus, in addition, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74086378738 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.532480288 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524916943522 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1968493585 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1052631579 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8421052632 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57894736842 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.97078651685 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 49.0 7.80617977528 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179465995096 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569470927665 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693962212999 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576544118985 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647073771523 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.1392134831 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 48.8420337079 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.1743820225 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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