The human mind is always superior to machines because machines are only tools of human mind.
The statement attempts to imply superiority to human mind over machine. As, human mind is the main artist of those machines, it is reasonable to comply with the statement, but technological advancement in the field of Artificial Intelligence 'AI' may challenge our superiority over those lifeless machine parts in near future.
From the beginning of civilization, we human, are continuously trying to excel our needs and difficulties. People invented different tools to satisfy their needs. For example, to travel from one place to another, today we have cars, boats, airplanes and so many other medium which are all machines. They all are the brainchild of engineers, doctors, technicians, scientists. So, when there was a demand for something, to make life a bit more easier, we worked on that, developed concept, fabricated body parts and finally brought it to the people. If something did not work well, we reworked on it, tried to find out what is wrong, fixed those bugs and modified the idea. Therefore, we can say that, human mind always invented those machines to satisfy their needs, to make life more easier and modified or demolished them in case of poor performance, That is why, our mind is more superior than those machines, which is more or less like tools, going through continuous development.
Additionally, If we look at computer, we can understand the whole theme of the statement through a simple programming code. In making a video game, programmer needs to write a millions of code and if something goes wrong, they find it through debugging and remove the bug. That is how, they work with those discontinuities and make the game flawless. Similarly, in every aspect, we work with those machines and brought out the best through rigorous scrutinizing. So, that is our mind which is working over machines and that is why, mind undoubtedly holds a superior position over machines.
On the other hand, if we go to a workshop, is is visible that the operator is working with a machine, where the main job is being done by the machine itself. Similarly, without a computer, it would not have been possible to make and run a video game, to write code, to fix bug. So, apparently, it is the machine who is actually doing the main task. Large-complex calculations, tedious experiments, tracking records are time consuming and sometimes impossible to do without a computer. Recently, science have made groundbreaking advancement in the field of artificial intelligence. That day is not far, when a robot will do all human activities without any command from human, as 'AI' suggests, they will regenerate, heal themselves. Some scientists also vehemently argued that, development of artificial intelligence will be the last pin in the coffin of human civilization, submission of human civilization before those machine tools.
To conclude, human mind is the main artist of those machines, it is reasonable to comply with the statement, but technological advancement in the field of Artificial Intelligence 'AI' may challenge our superiority over those lifeless machine parts in near future. So, we can infer that, in coming days, we can not just say that, we human mind is the superior of all kind, because big brother may control the world by then.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...emand for something, to make life a bit more easier, we worked on that, developed concept, ...
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Line 3, column 780, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...es to satisfy their needs, to make life more easier and modified or demolished them in case...
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Line 3, column 878, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[2]
Message: The adjective more is normally used with to and does not need 'more' (so called implicit comparative). Probably you need to write: 'superior to'.
Suggestion: superior to
...r performance, That is why, our mind is more superior than those machines, which is more or less l...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a million'
Suggestion: a million
...a video game, programmer needs to write a millions of code and if something goes wrong, th...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a million' or simply 'millions'?
Suggestion: a million; millions
...a video game, programmer needs to write a millions of code and if something goes wrong, th...
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
...the other hand, if we go to a workshop, is is visible that the operator is working wi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'apparently', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'more or less', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2208 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.1568 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0752 0.0880659088768 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0512 0.0497285424764 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0528 0.0444667217837 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1056 0.12292977631 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0256 0.0406280797675 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95448091481 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.032 0.030933414821 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0032 0.0016655270985 192% => OK
Determiners: 0.1024 0.0997080785238 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0176 0.0249443105267 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176 0.0148568991511 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3267.0 2732.02544248 120% => OK
No of words: 540.0 452.878318584 119% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.58838876751 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318518518519 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266666666667 0.280924506359 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205555555556 0.200843997647 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.155555555556 0.132149295362 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95448091481 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 219.290929204 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477777777778 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 56.6799763717 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.4782608696 23.380412469 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3876065004 59.4972553346 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.043478261 141.124799967 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4782608696 23.380412469 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.695652173913 0.674092028746 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 50.1449275362 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.34969325153 1.64882698954 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432999861476 0.391690518653 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114749588549 0.123202303941 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0865343170584 0.077325440228 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.486985996799 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161917130289 0.149214159877 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148617727143 0.161403998019 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905593058002 0.0892212321368 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.392793552746 0.385218514788 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0672710513198 0.0692045440612 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304002351103 0.275328986314 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474298634443 0.0653680567796 73% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 7.22455752212 194% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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