The machines are masterpieces of Human beings, which evolved the whole world in most of areas. While this essay asserting that people superior to machines forever is too optimistic about machines as well as human beings. To me, the machines sometimes outstrip the human beings by a huge scale like computers, We as the most clever species in the world presently should rethink about our relationship to the machines, which are tools now while unpredictable in the future without comprehensive consideration.Thus I will address my views below.
To be honest, there are some machines superior to human beings because we need them to be. Thanks to Alan Touring, the name I respect everytime when I recall his story, who invented the Enigma to decode the German encrypted letter in the WAR II, his famous theory which constructed the Quantum Mechanics is the foundation of Computer theory, this most significant machine in the 20th Century will make millions of calculations in one second, that is impossible for people. While we are easy to find, all of these invetions from Enigma to Computers, are all by human beings' demands which means we need them to sovlve the problems which we could not figure out immediately. Thus do not worry about the machines like computers will concquor us at this point, like the essay asserts, they are tools.
Due to the rapid development of our soceity especially after the comprehensive using of computers as tools, we are stepping in a new era as information technology age. This glorious name will also mean the tools like artificial intelligence is about to be on the stage of history.A more bright future in front of us is calling while we should also be cautious.
That is the complexity of the human beings' future with so many advanced and still developing technology. First of all, Cloning technology, a very controversial tecnology accompanying with us from the last century to present. This useful technology will be in practice by the invetions of miniscule machines in medical field which can edit DNA. Thus the human beings will edite ourselves first time in the history. Organ transplant will be more convinient by this method becasuse you can copy the organ of yourself, how ever you can copy yourself as a whole. In other word, if this replication happened without informing you is a very tricky issue. Think about one day you after work, tired getting home while found there is another you is just watching TV, this scene we saw too much in the fiction film, so that's it. Secondly, still with our good friends computers, which is celebrated in Deep Learing these years. After winning the human chess champion , the future relationship of human and computers attracted people's attentions again. Thus we have to be cautious that we should master the computer in the future while not controlled by them, which scence also on the screens for times.
In conclusion, this topic should be revised as we should control machines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the areas') or simply say ''most areas''.
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Suggestion: Thus
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, while, as to, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2482.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 501.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95409181637 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71258864785 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516966067864 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 774.0 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1395488709 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.1 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.05 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277004658439 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929102891143 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509308892671 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143411620859 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924243343758 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.