If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The speaker asserts that as long as goal is worthy, any means taken to attain it are justifiable. Indeed, stopping at nothing to attain goal can help us fulfill some purposes. However, if any means taken to attain goal are extreme, it will causes a negative influence on society and individuals. There are three different fields, including economic, political, and entertainment fields, that can reflect the negative effect. In my point of view, I strongly disagree with the speaker.
To begin with, in the realm of economy, any means taken to attain goal will cause economic recession. Despite the fact that companies want to earn more profit, a worthy goal to them, if they stop at nothing to get what they want, they will cause social conflicts and economic disorder. Unfair competition can be an example. Since unfair competition cause economic injury to a business through deceptive or wrong business practices, it will lead to economic disorder. In sum, even though the goal is worthy, stopping at nothing to get it will harm the economy.
Secondly, in the political area, stopping at nothing to get the goal will induce political disorder, even though the goal is worthy. To many politicians, becoming a president is their final goal. However, when they stop at nothing to be a president, they will cause social disorder. Africa conflict is an example. For own interest, Africa’s leaders launch many wars in Africa without minding victims. In a word, in the political area, if leaders stop at nothing to achieve the goal, it will lead to social disorder.
Finally, in the entertainment field, any means taken to attain goal will result in unfair competition, even if the goal is worthy. The actors want to be a well-known, which is reasonable. However, if they stop at nothing to obtain the goal, it may cause improper things to happen. Unspoken rules in Korea can be an illustration. In Korea, because many actresses want to be famous, they stop at nothing to attain their goal. In addition, in order to get opportunity of plays, they slept with director. As a result, many actresses commit a suicide, since such a insult are unbearable. In brief, if people stop at nothing to attain the goal, it is necessary to happen some improper things, even impairing themselves.
To sum up, in economic, political, and entertainment field, any means taken to attain goal will make society and individuals injury. Therefore, I totally disagree with what the speaker says.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...is worthy, any means taken to attain it are justifiable. Indeed, stopping at nothin...
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Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...ken to attain goal are extreme, it will causes a negative influence on society and ind...
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Line 7, column 559, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... actresses commit a suicide, since such a insult are unbearable. In brief, if peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, in brief, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98795180723 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71174389327 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433734939759 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 642.6 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 13.0 3.10617977528 419% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 4.38483146067 411% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9062100083 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.6153846154 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9615384615 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130279047929 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475625384036 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486919328663 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967409088745 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405652927514 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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