The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Today the pace of life increases with great speed. The science invented different gazettes which helps to complete tough work in few minutes. Even everything is available at door with one click in mobile applications. As the pace of life increases the problems also increases with same speed. I agreed with the statement that the increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves. There are different examples which strengthen my position in given issue statement.
Firstly, people like the fast pace of life in the city. The inventors take care of public demand and find new technologies which rapidly increases the pace but with it so many mental difficulties getting birth. As the pace of life increases the people need money and to earn more money and to enjoy life people become mentally unhealthy. The depression, anxiety and stress are commonly found in youth and it is the major problem with which they are fighting. The family disputes, parental discords, relationship difficulties aggression, and many more problems arises with rapid increased pace of life. As the world health organization researched about depression rate on mental health day 2017 and they found greatest depression cases noticed in India. India is developing with high-speed which increases rapid pace of life specially of youth. Mental health experts also agreed with that the mental problems arises due to increased pace of life.
Secondly, with mental health the physical health also degrades with rapid change in pace of life. Today children like to play games on mobiles instead of playground. People don't want to cook food they all order markets ready-made food. Due to extra spicy market food, cold drinks and flavored soda, lack of physical activities and use of gazettes in daily life the physical health damage day by day. The kid wear glasses in very young age and young adults are suffered with high blood pressure and cholesterol. Our physical health is related to our mental health and vice versa. So, the high-speed pace of life solves our so many difficulties but also causes some dangerous physical and mental problems.
Finally, if we observe at large level every country produces nuclear bombs and heavy dangerous weapons for safety and security but its again too much destructive invention. We know that our country has weapons to save us but at same time we amazed with our countries power. In future any country can destruct other with heavy weapons. As the pace of life increases the danger of life also increased. The people are not safe anywhere within country as well as not from outsides.
conclusively, on the view of above examples the statement become justified. It is clear that with increased pace of life few difficulties solved but at same time different type of problems take place which are more dangerous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2388.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07006369427 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54237397289 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496815286624 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9044431708 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.2857142857 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8214285714 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284844025236 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956929394432 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985049699207 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180677014448 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105742623412 0.0667264976115 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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