Issue 50
"At various times in the geological past, many species have become extinct as a result of
natural, rather than human, processes. Thus, there is no justification for society to make
extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered
species."
Every spices in this world are bearing important contribution for our ecological balance and we all human being are also connected in this process. So I do not agree with the statement that to make extraordinary efforts involving with great cost in money and jobs is not a proper justification to save endangered.Government should make strict policy to make ensure a healthy environment to save those endangered spices.It is our responsibilities to save those endangered spices.
Now a days people are making urban and cutting trees.Consequently most of the time we can not get any birds in city.Moreover city becomes without seasonal birds.As we are cutting trees and making cities birds are very rare to see in city life.So the environment we are creating here is hindering their appearance.It might be happen that after few years these birds can not be seen and become endangered spices.So our responsibilities is to make a healthy environment to save those endangered spices even though we are making cities.Moreover we have to have make social concern to save those endangered species.
Furthermore due to cutting excessive trees,making pollution in environment we are gradually producing CO2 more.It is called green house effect.Which is really have bad impact on some spices.Due to huge carbon emissions global warming is in a learning us.If we can not control this issues in future it will cause great destruction in our ecology.Besides all the spices will face with endangered.So we need huge efforts to make concern about these issues. Without taking proper steps we can not resolve the issues.
Moreover government should make strict rules to save those endangered species.As example in deep forest sometimes some dishonest persons are hunting elephants and they killing them to collect bones of that elephant. After that they sell those product and earn huge profits.Consequently forest elephants are becoming endangered species in forest. Government should make strict rules to punish them and make a strong securities to save those endangered species.With proper and constructive efforts can get out of us from this issues.
Besides that some species in oceans also in endangered.Some dishonest persons are breaking laws and hunting oceans big giant fishes to collect oil and by selling them make huge money.Gradually those ocean species also becoming endangered in environment.Government should make strong securities in ocean also to save those endangered species.
Finally we can draw main point from the above discussions that we human being need great effort solve this issues.We should concern about those endangered species whom are in endangered situation by making the environment unfavorable to them.Besides government should make strong rules to them who breaks the law by hunting those endangered species in environment .Whit proper actions and great efforts we can solve the problems and save those endangered species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2510.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44468546638 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23033625165 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459869848156 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 791.1 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.228017987 60.3974514979 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 251.0 118.986275619 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.1 23.4991977007 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.21951772744 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 7.80617977528 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0596485181498 0.243740707755 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292038448447 0.0831039109588 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0196624634417 0.0758088955206 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0392445919961 0.150359130593 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143012528379 0.0667264976115 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 14.1392134831 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 48.8420337079 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 12.1743820225 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.16 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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