A Scandal is either a political, financial, religious, social, moral or academical or any kind wrong-doing for that matter which deals with public and one gets known. While it is true that some part of it might be all dubious and false, a scandal is definitely useful in the sense that it sheds light on the culprits and the scale of their selfishness.
Oftentimes, social figures like politicians, higher government officials sugar coat their speeches and hide their intentions while addressing public and consequently their real image, whatsoever is belied. In such an environment of false imagery, there is no scope of malfeasance getting known outside. Further, the people committing such things act like shields to each other protecting each other with ulterior and often selfish motives.
Even honest people with good intentions will have no choice except accepting the situation and staying silent and there by thrives a vicious cycle of corruption. There is no chance of correcting these when they are not getting into light in the first place. On the other hand, Scandals, which are an abrupt outburst of such hedonistic crimes aid these get into focus.
Furthermore, Scandals act as source of finding the culprits and their crimes through their recriminations since everything is public now and their actions are monitored, and this is almost close to impossible in an otherwise normal scenario as it again points back to mutual protecting tendency of the people committing corruptions. A Scandal in a way lets us know the problem which we do not know exists and can be acted upon. And once the corruption and the culprits are public, it is usually the case that their position in the hierarchy doesn’t matter and they are subject to law now. Additionally, such outburst might help initiate fears in other wrong doers and keep them from indulging in any form of corruption or crime.
Having said this, it is possible that some scandals are just a result of dubious claims of one against another and are not of reliable and true facts.Such cases result in lot of noise in a large scale and in a public front. Therefore, the concerning officials handling the scandals should deal the matter and the check for the truthfulness diligently and eventually act upon with care to avoid undesirable consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Such
... and are not of reliable and true facts.Such cases result in lot of noise in a large...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, so, therefore, while, it is true, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05974025974 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75536551653 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8288041321 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.142857143 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0815807090655 0.243740707755 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314704166769 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270740491908 0.0758088955206 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0472794061098 0.150359130593 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025131782839 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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