Issue: So long as they are aware of the dangers involved, adults should not be legally bound to use seat belts.
The issue is wheather or not so long as they are know about the dangers involved, adults should not be legally bound to wear seat belts. I'm not agree with this statement because whether it adults or old people they should use of seat belts while driving for safety purpose.
Firstly, In this modern era every day acident are rose, and in this situation seat belt can save our life. It is not only helpful in acident, but it is also useful when they are sleep while driving a car, and they feel comfortable. For instance, Let assume a car acident with a truck if both driver weared seat belt then they have less injure compare to not wearing the seat belt because they not weared seat belt then their head crashed with a driving handle.
Secondly, Nowsdays Adult people going in high speed, so it rise to chance acident happen. adult people love to drive more than 100km/hr speed. on other hand older people drive on average speed like 50-60km/hr it is safe speed to drive a vehicle. More than 80km/hr speed is increase chance to happen acident.
on filp side, adults have good time and jugement rather than older people, so sometimes it not neccassary to wear selt belt for adult. But in highway every people should wear a seat belts.
On the whole, original statment was not veracity, Adults peeps always use should seat belts because for safety and their overspeed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 58.6224719101 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 2235.4752809 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 244.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66393442623 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07543832369 2.79657885939 74% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561475409836 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 704.065955056 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5471684304 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8333333333 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.21951772744 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313667012306 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129572230709 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154489467436 0.0758088955206 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198498098191 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163359118065 0.0667264976115 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 100.480337079 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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