It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
The statement argues that under the rigorous scrutiny of media, the society can’t view any living man or woman as a hero any longer. To some extent, I agree with this statement in that it reveals the voyeuristic nature of human and the profit-seeking nature of media. However, in a number of cases heroes are still celebrated by the public and thus I can’t completely agree with this statement.
People’s perception of heroes is contradictory. On one hand, they admire the heroic behaviors and laudable characters that heroes present. On the other hand, most people can’t help but become jealous of the attention and applauds heroes receive and wonder whether they have done something ignoble. Although the inappropriate urge to pry into other people’s lives is somewhat understandable and restrained in everyday life, the ill nature of common people inevitably drives the media to do the same to attract attention and increase their sales or hits since the unfortunate truth is that the chief objective of media is to maximize their profits for the shareholders instead of pursuing truth and enlightening the public. To confirm this argument, one need only take a glance at all the magazines and news websites that are rife with eye-catching titles and lurid scandals. What’s worse, the majority of the public who merely depend on media as their sources of information won’t have the judgement and objectivity to evaluate the reliability of what the media feeds them. As a result, the reputation of heroes or any celebrity can be easily destroyed.
However, the statement seems to imply that all heroes are celebrities that always draw the attention and inspection of the public and the media when in fact, ordinary people can be heroes as well, for example, the refugee who climbed up a building to save a kid from a conflagration in France. This kind of heroes, for better or worse, won’t stay in the spotlight for a long time since before long the media will be busy chasing after other celebrities’ scandals, yet the spark of humanity will leave a deep impression on the public and retain its power for a long time.
More importantly, even if heroes have done something indecent that is exposed by the media, as long as the indecency is venial or repairable and does not preponderate their feats, most people can still view them as heroes, though it may take them some time to come around. For example, George Washington, the founding father of the United States, practiced slavery for most of his life when slavery was considered normal and accepted without question. Therefore, to some degree, his failure to commit to full equality is understandable and moreover, he decided to free all the slaves in his will. Likewise, if we peruse the personal history of any acknowledged hero, we can always find some mistakes but they are not sufficient to invalidate the heroes’ achievements and discredit the heroes. After all, no one is perfect and people can relate more to an imperfect hero.
In conclusion, the sharp decline in admiration for heroes in today’s society arises from the voyeuristic nature of people and is exacerbated by the profit-seeking nature of media. Yet looking at the bright side of humanity, I hold the opinion that the majority of people can still be inspired by the heroic behaviors of nameless heroes and the achievements of imperfect heroes.
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- It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. 66
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 83
- We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own. 79
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, look, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, after all, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2872.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 567.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06525573192 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87972968509 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90600006379 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495590828924 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 925.2 704.065955056 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.7155496712 60.3974514979 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.157894737 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8421052632 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94736842105 5.21951772744 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197986768965 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070013290442 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845234400516 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119891206196 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450873273202 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 100.480337079 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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