It is primarily in cities that a nation s cultural traditions are generated and preserved Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing

Culture and tradition are generally preserved in cities and small villages and modern society as well. As we are busy with our work-life these days. It's difficult to follow customs and traditions properly without the guidance of elderly people. Nevertheless, there are also cases where people living in big society the association cultural team help organize all small events and festivities and state-wise traditions.
The assumption that cultural tradition is preserved in cities proves that. Most people living in metro cities are not locals but people migrated from different parts of the country. So you see diverse traditions being celebrated and followed in cities. But it's being preserved by people who learned it in their families in villages.
The lack of social media in small parts of villages doesn't detail what's happening. As they are not trying to diversify it with sharing on Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram.
On the other hand. People living primarily in cities tend to share even a small change. They document it more than actually enjoying and doing it by heart.
However, it is also true that everything cannot be experienced in cities. But we living in an incredible society where we are constantly learning from each other.
Thus, the most important factor is people haven't forgotten the true meaning of all the important traditions. Even though they are busy with office lives, maintaining kids, and home.
Secondly, we have seen the holy cities like Haridwar, Rishikesh being small towns but the hub for celebrating and creating tradition by making yoga an international day. Promoting spiritual journey towards holy river Ganga. You get a different positive aura around the surrounding.
healthy body, healthy mind.
The first step towards celebrating is made only with the help of a guide which we get in our high-end buildings. It would be an extreme statement to say that culture is generated in cities. Mostly it's just followed in cities. It's still generated from the roots of ancestral ground.
Thus, it is clear that we must have a society of people with good morals, minds, and hearts with enough funds in hand to maintain tradition in cities. While on the other hand. People in villages don't care about funds while painting tradition. They enjoy, relax unwind with family, and make delicious meals for themselves and the community in general. Therefore, it would be correct to assume that cultural traditions are generated and preserved no matter where you live. It's just the way of celebrating them changes over time.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2147.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14868105516 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59854681035 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532374100719 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3871941884 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2580645161 118.986275619 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4516129032 23.4991977007 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.61290322581 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.97078651685 201% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185056499891 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044425966482 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054018127898 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657486241956 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530781763705 0.0667264976115 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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