It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
Topic states that we define ourselves mostly with our identification with our social group. Indisputably, this is true when it comes to most of the people we tend to define ourselves with social status given by the society. Nevertheless, our identification is not dependent on our social status but with our inner growth of ourselves. Thus i generally disagree with the opinion that our identification with social groups solely defines ourselves, and like to argue that its just another achievement of person not the identity of person.
First of all, In general people try to define themselves as a certain status that social group had decided for that person. This is generally not true because the social status is not one's identity but it is feat achieved by that people. For example, when we ask people who are you?. They tried to answer this question by giving occupational answers like , I am Businessman or I am fireman. But, this is social status given according to their job. This is not any performance mark for define ourselves.
Moreover, in today's world we are defined by what we do, not by what we are. This is true when we do the things which we like. Sometimes people tried to do thing they did not like because, of certain consequences that led him/her to that position. To illustrate this let's look at the example of people who are involved in illegal activity, sometimes they have to do this type of activity in pressure of something. As example to feed his/her family or in some cases people are forced by other mafias to do these things.
Admittedly, What we act that defines ourselves. But, people should not judge or define that person as what he/she do. And people should define themselves or other peoples by their nature. Because, how we act in any situation or how we handle the situation that defines our selves. Social status is a measure of our deeds in cases where we have do the things we liked to do or want to do. So, social status is not solely measurement of people but it's surely a persons achievement that led him to that status.
In sum, people try to define themselves by any social rank, it's not the measure to define ourselves. As long as people use it as only a social definition it's good okay. But, it should not be primly definition of people. In fact, we can say that by living in some social group , it does not mean that people contain certain characteristics that group had, but it is social feat achieved by people of that group and it's not their identity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 336, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...but with our inner growth of ourselves. Thus i generally disagree with the opinion t...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...t true because the social status is not ones identity but it is feat achieved by tha...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tion by giving occupational answers like , I am Businessman or I am fireman. But, ...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...ge or define that person as what he/she do. And people should define themselves or...
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Line 7, column 345, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...ure of our deeds in cases where we have do the things we liked to do or want to do...
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Line 7, column 460, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... measurement of people but its surely a persons achievement that led him to that status...
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Line 9, column 61, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...o define themselves by any social rank, its not the measure to define ourselves. As...
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Line 9, column 276, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... say that by living in some social group , it does not mean that people contain ce...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'thus', 'as to', 'for example', 'in fact', 'in general', 'first of all', 'in some cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.196754563895 0.240241500013 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.16430020284 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0689655172414 0.0880659088768 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0608519269777 0.0497285424764 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.105476673428 0.0444667217837 237% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.125760649087 0.12292977631 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0202839756592 0.0406280797675 50% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.58879305658 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0344827586207 0.030933414821 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0730223123732 0.0997080785238 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00811359026369 0.0249443105267 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0344827586207 0.0148568991511 232% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2515.0 2732.02544248 92% => OK
No of words: 448.0 452.878318584 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61383928571 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337053571429 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.189732142857 0.280924506359 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.120535714286 0.200843997647 60% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0892857142857 0.132149295362 68% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58879305658 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 219.290929204 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408482142857 0.48968727796 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.6092984287 55.4138127331 81% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.92 23.380412469 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4852155216 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 141.124799967 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.92 23.380412469 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.56 0.674092028746 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 36.8932142857 51.4728631049 72% => OK
Elegance: 1.03680981595 1.64882698954 63% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348927051762 0.391690518653 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.137658712902 0.123202303941 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0767707400008 0.077325440228 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.491766358951 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121630526272 0.149214159877 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136126858947 0.161403998019 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109539438598 0.0892212321368 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.375728123578 0.385218514788 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0358509617194 0.0692045440612 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251042970742 0.275328986314 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136818882211 0.0653680567796 209% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88274336283 225% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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