Peoples way of interacting with other people differ from person to person. This difference make them differ from each other. And offcourse their identification becomes different. I strongly concede with the above argument . However, i acknowledge that this one factor isn't enough to define one's identity.
Firstly, i wanna start with a proverd "coming events cast their shadows before". Poeple carry their qualities from their childhood itself. Those who have good communication with their family,society and their friend's circle seems to have good identification in the society . Everyone considers him to be a good person. Actually what's inside is seen outside . People can't move away the long path without being true to himself .
Secondly, let me give examples of my father . He is such a generous person i have ever met . I am not talking through my personal experience but also through those people, he is associated with appreaciates his generousity ,humbleness and the supporting nature. I get chance to be inspired from him . The influence that he has made in the family ,society and the city is incredible . As mentioned earlier, whats inside is seen outside.
In sum, from the above paragraph's,i conclude that our identification with social groups define ourself.However, it depends on the nature of people whether they wanna be identified or not . Everybody needn't have to have same nature like others and its not possible too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 230.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30434782609 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01203505555 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65652173913 0.4932671777 133% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4053778014 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2105263158 118.986275619 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1052631579 23.4991977007 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0984027245295 0.243740707755 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0260066512534 0.0831039109588 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377148352263 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637731869954 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250651961494 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 48.8420337079 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 12.1743820225 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.57 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.8971910112 38% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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