It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing a

Since prehistorical time, sapiens, human beings’ ancestors, assembled into a community to ward off being threatened to death by large mammals. At the same time, they formed regulations and conventions for better and harmonious living patterns and also built a variety of communities which later constitute a massive society. Till now, people, as social animals, define their owns in social groups of families, careers, and communities to some extent; however, maverick people define themselves mainly by their own rather than conformity with others.

Socialization and urbanization stimulate people to work and live densely, therefore, most people define themselves by what communities they belong to. When a baby is born, he or she will belong to the daughter or son of parents. In the following years, they are being raised and taken care of by parents and parents give their children all love they have. Children are imbibed with parents’ characters and behaviors. For instance, if parents grapple with the economic hardship, children might become tenacious and strong-minded like parents do; if parents lose their temper, children would become pessimistic and sensitive.

In kindergarten and schooling time, individuals forge themselves by association with others because communal environment influences their judgement and preference concerning what to do and how to do. Take a look at kindergarten individuals, kids gradually know that sharing toys with each other is necessity and listening to teachers is a discipline. On the contrary, grabbing peers’ toys or picking out vegetables from plates is undisciplined and naughty. In addition, a certain middle-school student is elected to be a class monitor or is sifted in gifted basketball player team as linebackers or forwards when they are jointed in different groups and then register shine over others. Therefore, it is by involvement and association with others in schools that individuals define themselves.

Furthermore, gradually stepping into the society as employees, they change roles but still define themselves in association with others. In hospital, a doctor must shoulder the responsibility of taking operations for saving lives of patients. Nurses must pour considerateness and patience to patients in wards for better recovery. In politics, politicians must spare no effort in tackling with unemployment and terrorism, which then will increase their approval rating. In commercial worlds, phone producers must upgrade technology and design aesthetics to draw more customers’ eyeballs and buy them. That is to say, in every industry, everyone plays different but indispensable role in every group. Never would they be clearly positioned if they do not live in social groups.

However, when experiencing sweetness and bitterness during growing up, people become mature mentally and find themselves with their own understanding towards life rather than identification of social groups. Current social codes signal to people that money can buy everything. Although some people make money at the cost of health and alienation from families and friends, some people still choose to quiet and detached lives. The writer of Killing a Mocking Bird Harper Lee won the Pulitzer Prize in the 1960s and her influential novel brought her fame, recognition, and also money. However, she still put them down and granted no requests with interviews and public appearance because she would not go through the pressure and publicity she went through in To Kill a Mockingbird for any amount of money. Only when going through hardship and achieving dreams had people better pursue serenity and detachment. Most of individuals’ perceptions and pursuits does not influence theirs any more. Detachment is regarded as the worthiest fortune for these people.

To conclude it, individuals’ families, careers, hobbies identify themselves in the whole lifetime. However, maverick people always identify themselves based on their own experiences and viewpoints towards life.

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Average: 7.9 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, on the contrary, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 43.0 14.8657303371 289% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3453.0 2235.4752809 154% => OK
No of words: 613.0 442.535393258 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63295269168 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97582523872 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06095622994 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 350.0 215.323595506 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570962479608 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 1042.2 704.065955056 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6879596415 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.1 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4333333333 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1422236127 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356300447953 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332864602478 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070630991816 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388160758697 0.0667264976115 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 186.0 100.480337079 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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