It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
It is without doubt true that our social roles shape us. However, to which extent does a social identity defines a person is under controversial discussion ever since civilization comes into being.
The social groups that we belong to entitle us so that we have our roles to confront the world, and the outside understand us with these entitlements. We bolster ourselves, gaining our position in the kaleidoscope of the human society by various groups and carriers that show up on our name cards, written in our resumes, or mentioned in our self-introductions. Nobody comes from nowhere is hard to be trusted. We introduce ourselves as someone who works at someplace to a new acquaintance, because sImply a name and appearance is not enough to make a new friend. We need more to be self-defined and understood. To this extent, social groups defines us, as a stranger facing an new entity, whether it’s a person or another social group.
Nonetheless, when it comes to a whole person, with depth and multiple perspectives, social groups would not be enough. We could certainly categorise a dozen of teenagers in uniform passing by as high school students, but we never know each of them as an individual. Is anyone of them a geek addicted to electric? Is there a girl among them who recently gets fascinated with a love novel? Yes, we know what social groups they belong to —a high school of a certain name, but that’s it. Groups only provides us with a part of identification, and merely the superficial part that decorates our life, like an outfit, whether glorious or quotidian, that covers and conceals protean souls and only grudgingly gives out a modicum of information.
There are things, that shapes people’s personalities and traits, and gives inner identity to them, which is more important when defining a person. Life experience would be a significant one. It is proved by psychology that experience of people, especially that of their childhood and adolescence, shapes their personality and values. A person grew up in a family full of love and care is likely to be a fine-tempered, caring one, while one raised in an environment of violence would tend to be fractious and bellicose. Other experience, such as travelling is also possible to influence a conservative and narrow mind. When it comes to this point of self-define, our groups or carriers seems much less important.
Keep searching for things that define people, we will see education, their family, friends, and even their enemies… We couldn’t say that these are elements to be listed low, as we cannot say social groups identification is the primary one. Admitting the important role it plays in shaping us, doesn’t necessarily equal to that it’s of most significance. Self-identification is a complex thing that we expend our whole lifetime trying to figure out, and the last thing to do is to exclaim something as a dominant part of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'define'?
Suggestion: define
... to which extent does a social identity defines a person is under controversial discuss...
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Line 3, column 676, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...groups defines us, as a stranger facing an new entity, whether it's a person ...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'while', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198260869565 0.240241500013 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.16347826087 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0921739130435 0.0880659088768 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0434782608696 0.0497285424764 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0817391304348 0.0444667217837 184% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.102608695652 0.12292977631 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0278260869565 0.0406280797675 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.09038482812 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0365217391304 0.030933414821 118% => OK
Particles: 0.00695652173913 0.0016655270985 418% => OK
Determiners: 0.0730434782609 0.0997080785238 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0104347826087 0.0249443105267 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0191304347826 0.0148568991511 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2956.0 2732.02544248 108% => OK
No of words: 492.0 452.878318584 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0081300813 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.363821138211 0.366273622748 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260162601626 0.280924506359 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182926829268 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136178861789 0.132149295362 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09038482812 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 219.290929204 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54674796748 0.48968727796 112% => OK
Word variations: 66.6869034136 55.4138127331 120% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3913043478 23.380412469 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5004408174 59.4972553346 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.52173913 141.124799967 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3913043478 23.380412469 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.347826086957 0.674092028746 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 47.4075645104 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.13855421687 1.64882698954 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331802454624 0.391690518653 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0696217073124 0.123202303941 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0549633336858 0.077325440228 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.46752443723 0.547984918172 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138415175659 0.149214159877 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115547877105 0.161403998019 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731480548662 0.0892212321368 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.342655434203 0.385218514788 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0684029447672 0.0692045440612 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228367055162 0.275328986314 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590263534752 0.0653680567796 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.