“It’s not possible for someone to effectively care for others unless they are taking good care of themselves.”
It is only human to care for others and be dependable on each other. Although, it is a noble act to do so, however, a person who does not take care of their own health, mentally, physically and spiritually, is unlikely to assist others in a positive way, since we are what we feel and think. Even though we might be willing to act selflessly, disregarding all the signs and symptoms that we are not in a good state to do so but only through self-efficacy and self well-being can we truly have a beneficial effect on others.
If a person is not in their prime stage, then he or she is less likely to be able to give their hundred percent while caring for others. This may result in others being harmed unintentionally or even having a negative impact on others surrounding them. This is due to the fact that humans are only able to perform effectively and efficiently when they are in a sound mental and physical state. Therefore, a person must take care of themselves first by self-reflection and looking after their own health. This will make the person to think positively mentally and spiritually, enabling them to serve others well and also spread positive vibes. For example, a corrupt person is less likely to be able to serve others morally and ethically, hence it is necessary for him or her to change himself first before serving others. In fact, in most civilizations where people take good care of themselves, have a higher likelihood to flourish faster than those where people lack self-awareness.
There are a number of ways in which a person can overcome problems that they might face and which might cause them to feel miserable. A great way to feel emotionally strong and resilient in times of stress is to feel connected to a broad community. Think about the things you like to do. You can expand your social network by looking into a community organization that brings people together who share the same interests. For instance, many communities have local biking, hiking, or walking groups. Is there something you've always wanted to do like learn a new language? Take a class, or join a local group. You also may find the support you need through local support groups for a specific issue like parenting, dealing with a health problem, or caring for a loved one who's ill.
Therefore, if everyone takes care of their own selves first by attending to their physical, mental and emotional needs and chasing the things they like to do best, then they can care for others more whole heartedly. Indeed, a person who satisfies their own self-intellectually and acts within their core values is able to think transcendentally and serve others wisely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...iritually, is unlikely to assist others in a positive way, since we are what we feel and think. E...
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Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
..., or walking groups. Is there something youve always wanted to do like learn a new la...
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Line 5, column 771, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who's
...alth problem, or caring for a loved one whos ill. Therefore, if everyone takes ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2209.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76077586207 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75951544622 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525862068966 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 698.4 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7872932348 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.45 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209406553567 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663365583319 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615146524505 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137495958201 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331528507645 0.0667264976115 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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